专题02 告知信+道歉信+慰问信（测试）原卷版
目 录
告知信8篇 P1
道歉信7篇 P4
慰问信6篇 P8
【告知信·01】（24-25高二上·黑龙江鸡西·期中）假定你是李华，你计划寒假期间去海南旅游，留学生朋友Jack得知消息后想和你一起去。请你根据下面的要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 旅游安排；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80字左右。
2. 书写清晰、工整
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【告知信·02】（24-25高三上·安徽·期中）假定你是李华，上周末和父母一起参加了当地农民的丰收节(Harvest Festival)。请就此事给你的英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.丰收节的见闻；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【告知信·03】（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，你们班在校英文报组织的以“太空”为主题的海报设计大赛中获奖。请你给英国朋友 Peter写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）创作过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【告知信·04】（24-25高三上·广西·期中）假定你是李华，在上周学校举行的“定格校园春光”(Capture Spring on Campus)摄影大赛中获得一等奖。请向你的英国笔友David写信介绍此事，内容包括：
1.获奖作品描述；
2.参赛感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【告知信·05】（24-25高二上·安徽铜陵·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周末你们班在杭州进行了为期两天的研学活动。请你给美国朋友Simon写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 研学内容；
2. 你的感想。
参考词汇: 研学 learning trip
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【告知信·06】（24-25高三上·广东广州·期中）假定你是李华，新西兰交换生Vincent的摄影作品入选了你校举办的班级文化摄影展。请你给Vincent写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺；
(2)简评其摄影作品。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【告知信·07】（24-25高三上·北京昌平·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华，你班的英国交换生Jim对即将举办的“劳动最光荣”主题教育活动很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件告知他相关事宜，邮件内容包括：
1. 活动目的及形式；
2. 活动内容及你的收获。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Li Hua
【告知信·08】（24-25高二上·江苏常州·期中）假设你是李华，你参加了学校组织的诗歌朗诵体验活动，请你给远在国外的笔友Emma写一封邮件，分享你在这个活动中的经历。内容包括：
1. 你的经历：
2. 你的感受：
注意：1. 词数不能少于80；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Emma,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【道歉信·01】（24-25高二上·黑龙江绥化·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Wilson邀请你本周末和他一同去动物园看大熊猫，但你有事不能陪他前往。请你给他发封邮件谢绝 (decline) 邀请，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明理由；
3. 另约时间。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【道歉信·02】（24-25高一上·黑龙江伊春·期中）假定你是李华，和加拿大笔友Natalie约好在本周六晚上通过语音聊天(voice chat)的方式共同研读英文小说《雾都孤儿》(Oliver Twist)，但你因故不能参加。请你用英文给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右
参考词汇：道歉apologize
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【道歉信·03】（24-25高三上·甘肃定西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你昨天不小心把英国交换生Mary从美国带来的耳机弄丢了。你给她写一封邮件向她表示歉意。内容包括：
1.说明情况并道歉；
2.送另外一款耳机给她；
3.邀请她参加一次活动作为补偿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3.参考词汇耳机earphone。
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to say sorry to you for my having lost the earphone I borrowed from you yesterday.
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I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【道歉信·04】（24-25高一上·山西太原·期中）假定你是李华，因你近期复习备考，不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达歉意；
（2）说明原因；
（3）询问对方回看方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi Penny!
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Love,
Li Hua
【道歉信·05】（24-25高一上·四川成都·期中）假如你是李华，你和你的好朋友Kate商定好本周末去博物馆，但现在有事去不了了，请给她写一封电子邮件告知相关情况。内容包括：
1．对无法赴约表示歉意；
2．解释无法去博物馆的原因；
3．提出补救措施。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【道歉信·06】（24-25高一上·安徽蚌埠·期中）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Mark邀请你周日一起去科技馆，但你因故无法前往，请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.解决方案。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【道歉信·07】（24-25高二上·山东菏泽·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的外教Wilson明天下午要做一个关于“智能家居”（Smart Homes）的讲座，你因故不能参加，请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 询问是否有讲座的相关资料。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
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【慰问信·01】（24-25高二上·广西·期中）假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害，请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容包括：
1.询问Eric及家人的情况；
2.台风造成的严重后果；
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【慰问信·02】（24-25高二上·四川达州·期中）假定你是李华，你在美国友好学校交流期间认识的朋友Smith因为家乡遭遇了飓风，心情低落。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1.表示关心；
2.介绍同学们可以提供给灾区的帮助；
3.鼓励他振作起来重建家园。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【慰问信·03】（24-25高二上·天津南开·阶段练习）假设你是某高中生李津，你班的英国交换生Jack在“汉语桥”演讲选拔比赛中因表现不佳而落选，请你代表全班写一封信，内容包含以下几点：
1. 代表班级安慰；
2. 进行鼓励；
3. 表示愿意提供帮助。
参考词汇：
“汉语桥”演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Speaking Contest
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【慰问信·04】（24-25高二上·四川绵阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华,你的美国笔友 Mike 发来邮件说他在最近的学生会( the students’ union)竞选中落选了，因此他很伤心，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.给与安慰；
2.表达鼓励。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【慰问信·05】（23-24高一下·广西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉。请你给他写一封邮件，表示关心，内容包括：
1．表示安慰;
2．提出建议并表示祝愿。
注意：1．词数80左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：拉伤肌肉strain a muscle
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【慰问信·06】（23-24高一上·河南信阳·期中）假设你是李萍，得知你的外籍教师Fred在下班回家的路上发生车祸住院。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
1. 表达同学们的关心；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred,
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Li Ping
()专题02 告知信+道歉信+慰问信（测试）解析版
目 录
告知信8篇 P1
道歉信7篇 P12
慰问信6篇 P21
【告知信·01】（24-25高二上·黑龙江鸡西·期中）假定你是李华，你计划寒假期间去海南旅游，留学生朋友Jack得知消息后想和你一起去。请你根据下面的要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 旅游安排；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80字左右。
2. 书写清晰、工整
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【满分范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me.
I’d like to share my travel plan with you. First, I will go there by train. Besides, I am planning to stay there for five days to fully enjoy myself. It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done. Above all, I will attend a few traditional festivals there. Such is my plan. If you’d like to join me, please tell me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生留学生朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，介绍海南旅游安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动：excited→thrilled
玩得高兴：enjoy oneself→have fun
打算：plan to→intend to
此外：besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done.
拓展句：Playing beach volleyball is still able to be done because it won’t be so hot there then.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you’d like to join me, please tell me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【告知信·02】（24-25高三上·安徽·期中）假定你是李华，上周末和父母一起参加了当地农民的丰收节(Harvest Festival)。请就此事给你的英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.丰收节的见闻；
2.你的感想。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you one of my interesting experiences. Last weekend, I, together with my parents, went to the local Harvest Festival, which was held to celebrate farmers’ harvests.
The festival was a mixture of colors, sounds and flavors. Stalls were filled with fresh produce, from plump tomatoes to golden corn, and the air was full of the scent of delicious food being cooked. Traditional dancing and music added to the festive atmosphere.
Apart from celebrating the harvest, the festival also brought the community together. It was heartwarming to see people of all ages enjoying the festivities and sharing their pride in the local produce. It made me appreciate the hard work of farmers and the importance of community spirit.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件，说明上周末和父母一起参加了当地农民的丰收节的情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
庆祝：celebrate→observe
一起：together with→along with
美味：delicious→tasty
重要性：importance→significance
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：The festival was a mixture of colors, sounds and flavors. Stalls were filled with fresh produce, from plump tomatoes to golden corn, and the air was full of the scent of delicious food being cooked.
拓展句：The festival was a mixture of colors, sounds and flavors, when stalls were filled with fresh produce, from plump tomatoes to golden corn, and the air was full of the scent of delicious food being cooked.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last weekend, I, together with my parents, went to the local Harvest Festival, which was held to celebrate farmers’ harvests. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was heartwarming to see people of all ages enjoying the festivities and sharing their pride in the local produce. (运用了it作形式主语)
【告知信·03】（2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，你们班在校英文报组织的以“太空”为主题的海报设计大赛中获奖。请你给英国朋友 Peter写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
（1）创作过程；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Peter.
I’m thrilled to share that our class won an award in the space-themed poster design contest held by our school English newspaper! It was a fantastic journey.
Teaming up with my fellows, we brainstormed ideas and divided tasks, some for design, some for research and content creation, which not only enhanced our teamwork skills but also deepened our understanding of space exploration. The process was challenging yet rewarding. I’m incredibly proud of China’s achievements in space, which have greatly inspired our poster design. It’s a memory I will cherish for a long time.
You will find a picture of the poster attached to this email. I can’t wait to hear what you think about it and do you have any interesting experiences to share
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，告知其自己班级在校英文报组织的以“太空”为主题的海报设计大赛中获奖一事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
提高：enhance→boost
对……感到自豪：be proud of→take pride in
珍视：cherish→treasure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You will find a picture of the poster attached to this email.
拓展句：You will find a picture of the poster which is attached to this email.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Teaming up with my fellows, we brainstormed ideas and divided tasks, some for design, some for research and content creation, which not only enhanced our teamwork skills but also deepened our understanding of space exploration. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m incredibly proud of China’s achievements in space, which have greatly inspired our poster design. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【告知信·04】（24-25高三上·广西·期中）假定你是李华，在上周学校举行的“定格校园春光”(Capture Spring on Campus)摄影大赛中获得一等奖。请向你的英国笔友David写信介绍此事，内容包括：
1.获奖作品描述；
2.参赛感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear David,
I’m thrilled to tell you that I won first prize in our school’s “Capture Spring on Campus” photography competition, whose aim was to motivate students to appreciate the beauty of nature and capture unforgettable moments of spring on campus.
My winning photo was taken in front of the library, where a cherry blossom tree was blooming. Pink flowers gently fell onto the ground while students were sitting on the grass reading or chatting. The winning improved my confidence in pursuing photography and inspired me to find the hidden beauty in school.
What about the spring on your campus Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友David写信，介绍自己在上周学校举行的“定格校园春光”(Capture Spring on Campus)摄影大赛中获得一等奖的事情，内容包括获奖作品的描述以及参赛感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动：thrilled → excited
比赛：competition → contest
欣赏：appreciate → enjoy/admire
追求：pursue → seek/chase
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The winning improved my confidence in pursuing photography and inspired me to find the hidden beauty in school.
拓展句：Not only did the winning improve my confidence in pursuing photography, but it also inspired me to find the hidden beauty in school.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to tell you that I won first prize in our school’s “Capture Spring on Campus” photography competition, whose aim was to motivate students to appreciate the beauty of nature and capture unforgettable moments of spring on campus. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句和关系代词whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] My winning photo was taken in front of the library, where a cherry blossom tree was blooming. (运用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【告知信·05】（24-25高二上·安徽铜陵·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周末你们班在杭州进行了为期两天的研学活动。请你给美国朋友Simon写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 研学内容；
2. 你的感想。
参考词汇: 研学 learning trip
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【满分范文】
Dear Simon,
I am writing to share an unforgettable learning trip our class had in Hangzhou last weekend. We visited the Hangzhou Museum, where we learned about the history and culture of the city. We also went to the Purple Mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.
Through this trip, I not only gained knowledge but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. It was a great experience. I realized the importance of preserving and promoting our traditions while embracing the future with an open mind.
Do you have similar experiences Looking forward to your story.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Simon写一封邮件分享研学经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable → memorable
旅程：trip → journey
获得：gain → obtain
意识到：realized → be aware of
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Through this trip, I not only gained knowledge but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. It was a great experience.
拓展句：Through this trip, I not only gained knowledge but also strengthened the bond with my classmates, which was a great experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We visited the Hangzhou Museum, where we learned about the history and culture of the city. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I realized the importance of preserving and promoting our traditions while embracing the future with an open mind. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
【告知信·06】（24-25高三上·广东广州·期中）假定你是李华，新西兰交换生Vincent的摄影作品入选了你校举办的班级文化摄影展。请你给Vincent写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达祝贺；
(2)简评其摄影作品。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Vincent,
I’m really happy to tell you that your photo was chosen for our class’s culture photography show. As a new student who comes from New Zealand, you’ve done an amazing job in getting used to life here and taking such cool pictures.
Your photos are really special. They show how much you enjoy life and notice small things. I especially like the one with the library in the sunset. It looks so peaceful and strong at the same time. Everyone thinks your photos are very creative and interesting.
We’re all looking forward to seeing more of your great work at the exhibition. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰交换生Vincent写一封邮件，告知他的摄影作品入选了学校举办的班级文化摄影展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy → delighted
习惯：get used to → get accustomed to
令人惊叹的：amazing → marvelous
喜欢：like → enjoy/be keen on
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I especially like the one with the library in the sunset.
拓展句：It is the one with the library in the sunset that I especially like.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a new student who comes from New Zealand, you’ve done an amazing job in getting used to life here and taking such cool pictures.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Everyone thinks your photos are very creative and interesting.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【告知信·07】（24-25高三上·北京昌平·阶段练习）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班班长李华，你班的英国交换生Jim对即将举办的“劳动最光荣”主题教育活动很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件告知他相关事宜，邮件内容包括：
1. 活动目的及形式；
2. 活动内容及你的收获。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m Li Hua. Since you’re interested in our “Labor Is the Most Glorious” themed educational activity, I’m glad to tell you some details.
The purpose of this activity is to raise our awareness of the value of labor. It will be carried out in the form of a combination of lectures and hands-on practice. During the activity, there will be a lecture first, introducing the great significance of labor in our daily lives and society. Then we’ll participate in some practical labor, like gardening in the schoolyard. I believe that through these activities, we will gain a stronger sense of teamwork. Also, we will realize that every small effort in labor can contribute to a better environment.
I hope you can also understand more about labor through this.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以班长李华的身份，给班级的英国交换生Jim写一封邮件，告知他即将举办的“劳动最光荣”主题教育活动的相关事宜，应简要说明活动目的和形式，具体介绍活动内容和预期得到的收获。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
目的：purpose→aim, goal
实施：carry out→conduct, implement
收获：gain→obtain, attain
有助于：contribute to→be helpful in, be conductive to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The purpose of this activity is to raise our awareness of the value of labor.
拓展句：This activity is arranged in order that our awareness of the value of labor can be raised.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you’re interested in our “Labor Is the Most Glorious” themed educational activity, I’m glad to tell you some details. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Also, we will realize that every small effort in labor can contribute to a better environment. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
【告知信·08】（24-25高二上·江苏常州·期中）假设你是李华，你参加了学校组织的诗歌朗诵体验活动，请你给远在国外的笔友Emma写一封邮件，分享你在这个活动中的经历。内容包括：
1. 你的经历：
2. 你的感受：
注意：1. 词数不能少于80；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Emma,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Emma,
I have some exciting news to share with you about a poetry recital I recently had at school!
Held last weekend in the stadium, the recital was truly a blend of imagination and emotion. My school mates showcased magnificent skills in their performances, sometimes slow, sometimes fast, all full of feelings. I recited a poem written by myself, earning a lot of applause out of my expectation. The experience was incredibly rewarding. Not only did it improve my understanding about poetry, but also served as a reminder of how art can be a powerful medium for expressing ideas and emotions.
Have you had any similar experiences Looking forward to your reply and sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给笔友Emma写一封邮件，分享自己在学校组织的诗歌朗诵体验活动中的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人兴奋的：exciting→thrilling
展示：showcase→display
值得的：rewarding→worthwhile
难以置信地：incredibly→unbelievably
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recited a poem written by myself, earning a lot of applause out of my expectation.
拓展句：I recited a poem written by myself, which earned a lot of applause out of my expectation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Held last weekend in the stadium, the recital was truly a blend of imagination and emotion.（运用了过去分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Not only did it improve my understanding about poetry, but also served as a reminder of how art can be a powerful medium for expressing ideas and emotions.（运用了部分倒装）
【道歉信·01】（24-25高二上·黑龙江绥化·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友Wilson邀请你本周末和他一同去动物园看大熊猫，但你有事不能陪他前往。请你给他发封邮件谢绝 (decline) 邀请，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明理由；
3. 另约时间。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Wilson,
While I appreciate your invitation to visit pandas this weekend, I might disappoint you by regretfully declining it. There happens to be an event of great importance specially held for the elderly in the Nursing Home this weekend.
As a volunteer there, I have been earnestly longing for the chance to do something meaningful for the elderly. I must express my sincere apologies to you for the regret I may cause to you.
If it is convenient for you next weekend, I’d be delighted to accompany you there. Eagerly expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生朋友Wilson发一封电子邮件，对不能陪他去看大熊猫表示歉意，说明理由，并另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：importance→significance
表达：express→convey
高兴的：delighted→glad
期待：expect→look forward to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There happens to be an event of great importance specially held for the elderly in the Nursing Home this weekend.
拓展句：There happens to be an event of great importance which will be specially held for the elderly in the Nursing Home this weekend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While I appreciate your invitation to visit pandas this weekend, I might disappoint you by regretfully declining it. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】If it is convenient for you next weekend, I’d be delighted to accompany you there. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【道歉信·02】（24-25高一上·黑龙江伊春·期中）假定你是李华，和加拿大笔友Natalie约好在本周六晚上通过语音聊天(voice chat)的方式共同研读英文小说《雾都孤儿》(Oliver Twist)，但你因故不能参加。请你用英文给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：写作词数应为80个左右
参考词汇：道歉apologize
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【满分范文】
Dear Natalie,
I’m extremely sorry to inform you that I won’t be able to participate in our planned voice chat to study Oliver Twist this Saturday evening.
My cousin, who studies abroad, is coming back this weekend and my family is throwing a welcome party for him. I really have to be there. I deeply regret this inconvenience and hope you can understand.
Shall we postpone our chat to next Saturday night I’m really looking forward to our in-depth discussion of the novel then.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大笔友Natalie就不能参加原本约好在本周六晚上通过语音聊天(voice chat)的方式共同研读英文小说《雾都孤儿》(Oliver Twist)一事写一封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
极其：extremely→ incredibly
参加：participate in→ take part in
计划的：planned→ scheduled
推迟：postpone→ delay
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：I deeply regret this inconvenience and hope you can understand.
同义句：I sincerely feel remorseful about this inconvenience and expect that you can understand.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My cousin, who studies abroad, is coming back this weekend and my family is throwing a welcome party for him. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m extremely sorry to inform you that I won’t be able to participate in our planned voice chat to study Oliver Twist this Saturday evening. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【道歉信·03】（24-25高三上·甘肃定西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你昨天不小心把英国交换生Mary从美国带来的耳机弄丢了。你给她写一封邮件向她表示歉意。内容包括：
1.说明情况并道歉；
2.送另外一款耳机给她；
3.邀请她参加一次活动作为补偿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3.参考词汇耳机earphone。
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to say sorry to you for my having lost the earphone I borrowed from you yesterday.
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I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to say sorry to you for my having lost the earphone I borrowed from you yesterday.
Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me. It was so cute that I couldn’t help following it until I found the phone was gone. I searched everywhere but I didn’t see it again. I can’t be more sorry. In return, I bought another style of earphone for you, hoping you will like it. At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
I have to say sorry to you again! Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Mary写一封邮件，为丢失她的耳机，向她表示歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找：search→look for
同时：at the same time→meanwhile
体验，领略：experience→have a taste of
举行：hold→host
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
拓展句：At the same time, I want to invite you to the activity which is scheduled to be held this weekend to experience Chinese culture on paper cutting.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last Saturday, I was reading in the park, listening to music with the earphone, when a lovely dog ran past me. (运用了be doing…when…句型)
[高分句型2] It was so cute that I couldn’t help following it until I found the phone was gone. (运用了so...that...引导结果状语从句)
【道歉信·04】（24-25高一上·山西太原·期中）假定你是李华，因你近期复习备考，不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表达歉意；
（2）说明原因；
（3）询问对方回看方式。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi Penny!
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Love,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Hi Penny!
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to apologize for not being able to watch the live broadcast of your speech this weekend as planned.
I am really looking forward to your speech, knowing it’s going to be informative and inspiring. But you know, I am busy studying for my upcoming exams, and it’s a pity that I am not available to watch it live.
Again, I’m sorry for not being there. Could you please let me know if there will be a way to watch the replay later That would be wonderful if I could get to see it. Thank you for your understanding!
Love,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就由于近期复习备考，不能按时收看英国笔友Penny本周末进行的网络演讲直播写一封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
道歉：apologize → make an apology
按计划：as planned → as scheduled
忙碌的：busy → occupied
方法：way → approach
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am really looking forward to your speech, knowing it’s going to be informative and inspiring.
拓展句：I am really looking forward to your speech, because I know it’s going to be informative and inspiring.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But you know, I am busy studying for my upcoming exams, and it’s a pity that I am not available to watch it live.（运用了that引导的主语从句，it作形式主语）
【高分句型2】Could you please let me know if there will be a way to watch the replay later （运用了if引导的宾语从句）
【道歉信·05】（24-25高一上·四川成都·期中）假如你是李华，你和你的好朋友Kate商定好本周末去博物馆，但现在有事去不了了，请给她写一封电子邮件告知相关情况。内容包括：
1．对无法赴约表示歉意；
2．解释无法去博物馆的原因；
3．提出补救措施。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Kate,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to visit the museum with you this weekend.
The reason why I break the appointment is that my parents hope I can visit my grandparents with them this weekend. It’s about half a year since we met them last time. Therefore, it is necessary for us to make sure they get good care.
If it’s convenient for you, I sincerely hope that we can go to the museum next weekend. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友Kate写一封信，告知她本周末无法同她一起去博物馆的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
拜访：visit→ pay a visit to
因此：therefore → consequently
确保：make sure → ensure
期盼：look forward to → expect
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It’s about half a year since we met them last time.
拓展句：We haven’t seen each other for half a year.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason why I break the appointment is that my parents hope I can visit my grandparents with them this weekend.（运用了why引导的限制性定语从句和that连接的表语从句）
【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, I sincerely hope that we can go to the museum next weekend.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和that连接的宾语从句）
【道歉信·06】（24-25高一上·安徽蚌埠·期中）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友 Mark邀请你周日一起去科技馆，但你因故无法前往，请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.解决方案。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mark,
I am truly grateful that you invited me to accompany you to the science museum this Sunday. However, I feel terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t because the arrangement conflicts with our weekly oral English group activity.
Since the beginning of this term, my group members have promised to improve our spoken English every Sunday afternoon in our extra-curricular time. Thus, it would be embarrassing to miss it. If we go to the science museum next Saturday, would that suit you
My sincerest apologies again for the inconvenience. Hope you can accept my rearrangement. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mark回一封电子邮件，他邀请你周日一起去科技馆，但你因故无法前往。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：grateful→thankful
尴尬的：embarrassing→awkward
提高：improve→boost
陪伴：accompany→keep pany
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Since the beginning of this term, my group members have promised to improve our spoken English every Sunday afternoon in our extra-curricular time.
拓展句：Since this term began, my group members have promised to improve our spoken English every Sunday afternoon in our extra-curricular time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] However, I feel terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t because the arrangement conflicts with our weekly oral English group activity. (运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] If we go to the science museum next Saturday, would that suit you (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
【道歉信·07】（24-25高二上·山东菏泽·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的外教Wilson明天下午要做一个关于“智能家居”（Smart Homes）的讲座，你因故不能参加，请根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
1. 表示歉意；
2. 解释原因；
3. 询问是否有讲座的相关资料。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Wilson,
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Dear Wilson,
I am writing to express my sincere apologies for being unable to attend your lecture on “Smart Homes” tomorrow afternoon.
I have always been interested in the topic of “Smart Homes” and was looking forward to hearing your insights on the subject. However, due to my current health condition, I am unable to leave my bed and attend the lecture. The question that I had been pondering over was whether it would be possible for you to offer me any materials or slides from the lecture. This would greatly help me understand the content and stay up to date with the topic.
Thank you for your understanding and support.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义，对于不能参加你的外教Wilson明天下午做的关于“智能家居”（ Smart Homes）的讲座一事，用英语给他写一封邮件表示歉意。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ have a passion for
期望：look forward to → have high expectations for
能够：be able to→ have the capacity to
帮助：help→ assist
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：However, due to my current health condition, I am unable to leave my bed and attend the lecture.
拓展句：However, owing to my present health status, I am incapacitated and unable to arise from my bed and participate in the lecture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my sincere apologies for being unable to attend your lecture on “Smart Homes” tomorrow afternoon.（运用了动名词短语作宾语）
【高分句型2】The question that I had been pondering over was whether it would be possible for you to offer me any materials or slides from the lecture.（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句和whether引导的表语从句）
【慰问信·01】（24-25高二上·广西·期中）假定你是李华，你的外国好友Eric的家乡发生了严重的台风灾害，请给他写一封邮件表示慰问。内容包括：
1.询问Eric及家人的情况；
2.台风造成的严重后果；
3.尽力提供帮助。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Eric,
How are you doing Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family.
As reported, the disaster caused significant damage to your hometown with more than twenty people losing their lives and many others injured. Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
I am deeply saddened by this disaster. But please don’t be worried, everything will gradually return to normal. If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给家乡发生了严重台风灾害的好友Eric写一封邮件，向他表示慰问。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可怕的：terrible→horrible
侵袭：hit→strike
无数的：numerous→countless
此外：additionally→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, leaving thousands of people homeless.
拓展句：Additionally, numerous houses were destroyed, which left thousands of people homeless.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that a terrible typhoon hit your hometown, I was really concerned about you and your family. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If there is anything I can do to support you, please do not hesitate to reach out. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和省略that的定语从句)
【慰问信·02】（24-25高二上·四川达州·期中）假定你是李华，你在美国友好学校交流期间认识的朋友Smith因为家乡遭遇了飓风，心情低落。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1.表示关心；
2.介绍同学们可以提供给灾区的帮助；
3.鼓励他振作起来重建家园。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I was shocked at the news about the hurricane in your hometown. It’s understandable that you sink into sadness.
Upon hearing the news, all the students in our school are willing to volunteer to lend a helping hand. We plan to raise some money, which will be put into your bank account. Besides, we intend to collect some basic necessities, such as clothes and tents for the victims.
Great damage as the hurricane has caused, I firmly believe things will get better. Cheer up and pick up your courage to restore your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以书信的形式向遭受飓风影响的朋友表达关心，介绍同学们可以提供的帮助，并鼓励朋友振作起来重建家园。
【详解】1.词汇积累
震惊的：shocked→astonished
悲伤：sadness→sorrow
受害者：victim→sufferer
重建：restore→rebuild
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I was shocked at the news about the hurricane in your hometown.
拓展句：I was shocked at the news, which told about the hurricane in your hometown.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We plan to raise some money, which will be put into your bank account. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s understandable that you sink into sadness. (运用了It作形式主语，that引导主语从句)
【慰问信·03】（24-25高二上·天津南开·阶段练习）假设你是某高中生李津，你班的英国交换生Jack在“汉语桥”演讲选拔比赛中因表现不佳而落选，请你代表全班写一封信，内容包含以下几点：
1. 代表班级安慰；
2. 进行鼓励；
3. 表示愿意提供帮助。
参考词汇：
“汉语桥”演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Speaking Contest
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【满分范文】
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits despite the recent outcome of the "Chinese Bridge" Speaking Contest. On behalf of our class, I want to extend our heartfelt sympathy and support to you through this challenging time.
We understand that the competition was a significant opportunity for you to showcase your language skills, and it’s completely normal to feel disappointed with the result. However, we believe that your participation alone is a testament to your courage and dedication to learning a new language. As the saying goes," The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step." Remember, even the most successful people have encountered setbacks on their path to greatness. We are more than willing to offer our help and support in any way we can.
Keep your chin up, Jack. Your journey with the Chinese language is far from over, and with your determination, we are confident that you will achieve great things in the future.
Warm regards,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你班的英国交换生Jack在“汉语桥”演讲选拔比赛中因表现不佳而落选这一情况，代表全班写一封信安慰和鼓励Jack。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尽管：despite→ in spite of
机会：opportunity→ chance
比赛：competition→ match
提供：offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
扩写句子
原句：As the saying goes," The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step."
拓展句：As the saying goes," The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step.", so whatever the outcome, it is commendable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We understand that the competition was a significant opportunity for you to showcase your language skills, and it’s completely normal to feel disappointed with the result.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及it’s+adj+to do sth的固定句型。）
【高分句型2】Your journey with the Chinese language is far from over, and with your determination, we are confident that you will achieve great things in the future.（运用了介词短语作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。）
【慰问信·04】（24-25高二上·四川绵阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华,你的美国笔友 Mike 发来邮件说他在最近的学生会( the students’ union)竞选中落选了，因此他很伤心，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.给与安慰；
2.表达鼓励。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【满分范文】
Dear Mike,
I am terribly sorry to learn that you didn’t do well in the election for the president of the students’ union. I know you must be very depressed about it, but please don’t lose your heart.
First and foremost, please know that your efforts are deeply appreciated and admired. Besides, you’d better remember success is not always measured by winning elections or achieving specific titles. The true measure of success lies in the growth you’ve experienced along the way and the lessons you’ve learned. Every challenge we face offers a chance to learn and to be better.
When it comes to success, it’s perseverance that plays the key part. Thus, hold up your head and be ready for the next chance. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。美国笔友 Mike 发来邮件说他在最近的学生会( the students’ union)竞选中落选了，因此他很伤心，请考生给他回一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做的好、擅长于：do well in→be good at
提供：offer→provide
机会：chance→opportunity
在于：lie in→consist in
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I am terribly sorry to learn that you didn’t do well in the election for the president of the students’ union.
拓展句：Learning that you didn’t do well in the election for the president of the students’ union, I feel upset.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Every challenge we face offers a chance to learn and to be better. (运用了省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2] First and foremost, please know that your efforts are deeply appreciated and admired. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
【慰问信·05】（23-24高一下·广西·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉。请你给他写一封邮件，表示关心，内容包括：
1．表示安慰;
2．提出建议并表示祝愿。
注意：1．词数80左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：拉伤肌肉strain a muscle
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Dear Peter,
I hope this email finds you well. I was sorry to hear that you’ve strained your leg muscle due to excessive exercise. Your dedication to staying fit is admirable, but it’s crucial to strike a balance to avoid such injuries.
Rest assured, a minor setback like this won’t keep you down for long. I suggest taking adequate rest, applying ice packs to reduce swelling, and consulting a physiotherapist for professional advice.
Remember, we’re all here to support you. I wish you a speedy recovery and hope to see you back in action soon, but this time, with a little more caution. Take care!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你班交换生Peter为了保持健康每天做体育运动，但最近囚为运动过量而拉伤了腿部肌肉，要求考生给他写一封邮件，表示关心。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关键的：crucial→essential
建议：suggest→advise
足够的：adequate→enough
小心：caution→carefulness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your dedication to staying fit is admirable, but it’s crucial to strike a balance to avoid such injuries.
拓展句：While your dedication to staying fit is admirable, it is also crucial that you strike a balance to avoid sustaining such injuries.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I was sorry to hear that you’ve strained your leg muscle due to excessive exercise.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I suggest taking adequate rest, applying ice packs to reduce swelling, and consulting a physiotherapist for professional advice.(动名词作宾语)
【慰问信·06】（23-24高一上·河南信阳·期中）假设你是李萍，得知你的外籍教师Fred在下班回家的路上发生车祸住院。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
1. 表达同学们的关心；
2. 安慰并鼓励他；
3. 表达祝愿与期望。
注意：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Fred,
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Li Ping
【满分范文】
Dear Fred,
On hearing the news that you’re injured and in hospital on your way home from work, we feel very sorry. Are you getting much better now Please don’t worry about your illness.
What you need to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor’s advice. We believe that you are brave enough to win the battle against your disease. You needn’t worry about our lessons, either. When you come back to school, we are all willing to work hard to make up for the missing lessons.
We are greatly convinced that we can catch up with others quickly. We all hope that you will recover as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Ping
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写封邮件慰问出车祸的外籍教师Fred。
【详解】1.词汇积累
消息：news→information
休息：have a rest→take a break
建议：advice→suggestion
返回：come back→return
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：We believe that you are brave enough to win the battle against your disease.
拓展句：We believe that you have enough courage to overcome your illness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What you need to do is to have a good rest and follow the doctor’s advice.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】We are greatly convinced that we can catch up with others quickly.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
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