3.结尾段落：(；(Ending)Reflection Every day at school is an opportunity for me to learn and grow. By planning myschedule wisely， I ensure that I don't waste any time and make the most of my school day. Remembering to balance academic studies with extracurricular activities keeps me motivated and engaged. I always strive to make good use of every minute during my school days.反思 在学校的每一天都是我学习和成长的机会。通过明智地计划我的时间表，我确保我 不会浪费任何时间，充分利用我的上学日。记住平衡学术研究和课外活动让我保持动力 和参与。我总是努力利用好每一分钟在我的学生时代。
三、写作框架
Step l 认真审题，明 确要求 审主题 A Day in the Life
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 观点鲜明，层次分明，语言简洁，过渡自然，综述观点。
Step 2分析要点，编制提纲 开头 1.开头(Introduction) 开头段落 (1)引入话题：Hello， everyone! Today， I'd like to share with you my school day. It's a busy yet fulfilling day filled with learning， fun， and friends. 你好，每个人!今天，我想和大家分享我的学校生活。这是忙碌而充实的 一天，充满了学习、乐趣和朋友。 (2)总体情况：I wake up early every morning， full of energy and excitement for what lies ahead. From the moment I step into the school gates， my day is filled with various activities that help me grow and learn. 我每天早起，充满活力和兴奋的前方。从我踏进学校大门的那一刻起， 我的一天就充满了各种帮助我成长和学习的活动。 (3)引出下文：Now， let me take you through my typical school day， starting from the early morning till the end of the day. 现在，让我带你度过我典型的上学日，从清晨开始直到一天结束。
正文 2.正文(body) 正文段落
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(1)早晨时光(Morning Routine) 时间：Around6：30 a.m. 活动：I start my day by getting up， having a quick breakfast， and gettingready for school. I usually listen to some English songs while getting dressed， which helps me wake up and get in the mood for learning. 感受：It feels great to start the day with a positive attitude and a full stomach. (2)去学校途中(Commuting to School) 时间：7：00a.m. 活动： I walk to school with my friends， chatting about our plans for the day and catching up on what happened over the weekend. 感受： Walking with friends makes the journey more enjoyable and less boring. (3) 上午课程(Morning Classes) 时间：7：30a.m.-12：00 p.m. 活动： I have four classes in the morning， including Math， English， Science， and Social Studies. Each class brings new knowledge and challenges that I love to explore. 感受： I feel engaged and curious throughout the classes， eager to learn more. (4)午餐与休息(Lunch and Break) 时间：12：00p.m. -1：00 p.m. 活动： I have lunch with my classmates in the cafeteria. We enjoy delicious food and share stories about our classes. After lunch， I take a short break to relax 感受： Lunchtime is a great opportunity to unwind and connect with friends. (5)下午课程与活动(Afternoon Classes and Activities) 活动：In the afternoon， I have two more classes followed by my favorite club
and recharge.
时间：1：00p.m.-4：00p.m.
activity， the Science Club. We conduct experiments and discuss interesting
scientific topics.
感受： Participating in club activities not only helps me develop my interests
but also makes my school day more colorful and exciting.
(6)放学回家(Heading Home)
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时间：4：00p.m. 活动： After school， I walk home with my friends， discussing our homework and plans for the evening. 感受：Walking home is a peaceful time to reflect on the day's events and prepare for what's to come.
结尾 3.结尾(Conclusion)结尾段落 (1)总结：Looking back on my school day， I feel grateful for the many opportunities it provides for me to learn， grow， and make friends. Each moment is precious， and I try my best to make the most of it. 回顾我的学校生活，我很感激它为我提供了许多学习、成长和交朋友的 机会。每一刻都是宝贵的，我尽我最大的努力去充分利用它。 (2) 展望未来：Iunderstand that school days are not just about academics but also about self-development and character building. I plan to continue to plan my days wisely， making sure I have enough time for studies， relaxation， and activities that I enjoy. 我明白上学不仅仅是为了学习，也是为了自我发展和性格塑造。我计划 继续明智地计划我的每一天， 确保我有足够的时间来学习、放松和我喜欢的 活动。 (3)表达决心：I promise to cherish every moment of my school life and strive to make the most of my time at school. By doing so， I know I'll be well-prepared for the future and ready to take on any challenge that comes my way. 我保证珍惜学校生活的每一刻，努力充分利用在学校的时间。通过这样 做，我知道我将为未来做好充分的准备，并准备好迎接任何挑战。
Step 3巧 用词句，衔接成文 类别 单词/短语
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) /to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/second/next/then其次finally/ in the end/at last最后last but not least 最后但同样重要的是at the same time/meanwhile同时
并列补充 and和；又；而且besides除此之外 in addition除此之外还有not only. . . but also 不但......而且 on the one hand...， on the other hand...一方面......另一方面......
转折对 but但是hever然而while然而
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比
递进 what's more甚至；更重要的是what's worse 更糟糕的是 even甚至especially特别是above all首先；最重要的是
因果/目的 because/as/since/ because of/for因为thanks to 多亏了...... as a result结果without没有 with the help of...在......的帮助下therefore所以 for this reason因为这个原因so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to为了for this purpose为了这个目的
举例 for example例如such as...比如；例如and so on等等
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知in my opinion依我来看 to tell the truth说实话to be honest诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand.. .on the other hand...一方面......又一方面...... some. . . while others...-一些人认为......而另一些人为...... Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点，而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之
四、写作范例
根据下面的图片提示， 描写Mrs. Smith一天的活动。词数不少于60。
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Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 介绍自己的一日生活
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 第一步，看图，清楚史密斯太太具体在哪个时间点做了什么事情； 第二步，按照时间顺序依次描写史密斯太太做的事情。 第三步，总结应该积极利用学校的时间。
Step 2列要点，编提纲
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
Mrs. Smith is oversixtyyearsold， but she is busy andhappyeveryday. She gets up at 7：00inthemorning. At 7：30， Mrs. Smith， a vibrant lady well past her sixties， leads afulfilling and joyful life each day. She rises at the crack of dawn， precisely at 7：00 a.m.， greeting the new day with a smile. By 7：30， she sits down to a hearty breakfast at home， savoring every bite of her nutritious meal. After breakfast， Mrs. Smith embarks on a leisurely stroll with her loyal companion， a wagging-tailed dog， enjoying the 词汇升级： vibrant精力充沛的
一、话题分析
本单元的写作主题是"介绍自己上学的一天"。在写作过程中，将从早晨起床开始，逐一描述 洗漱、早餐、上学途中的活动、课堂学习、午休、课外活动直至放学后的时间安排。
二、好词佳句
词汇短语积累 1.英语词汇短语积累 getup-起床have breakfast-吃早餐 rush to school -匆忙赶到学校morning classes-上午的课 take a break-休息一会儿recess-课间休息 lunchtime-午餐时间afternoon classes-下午的课 participate in extracurricular activities-参加课外活动club meetings-俱乐部会议 homework time-做作业时间study for exams-复习考试 go to bed-上床睡觉on schedule-按时 schedule one's day-规划一天be on duty-值日 take a shower -洗澡be punctual -守时
话题常用句型 1.I usually get up at [time] in the morning to start my school day. 我通常早上[时间]起床开始我的上学日。 2.After a quick breakfast， I rush to school to avoid being late. 吃完早餐后，我匆匆赶往学校以免迟到。 3.During the morning classes， I try to focus and actively participate in discussions.在上午的课上，我尽量集中精力并积极参与讨论。 4.At recess， I like to hang out with my friends and play some outdoor games. 课间休息时，我喜欢和朋友们一起出去玩一些户外游戏。 5.Lunchtime is always exciting because we get to eat our favorite foods in the cafeteria. 午餐时间总是很激动人心，因为我们可以在食堂吃到自己喜欢的食物。 6.In the afternoon， I attend a variety of classes and sometimes participate in extracurricular activities. 下午，我参加各种课程，有时也参加课外活动。 7.After school， I head straight to the [club name] club meeting where I enjoy learning new skills. 放学后，我直接前往[俱乐部名]俱乐部会议，在那里我喜欢学习新技能。 8.At home， I dedicate an hour or two to my homework and then study for upcoming exams. 在家里，我花一到两个小时做作业，然后为即将到来的考试复习。
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9.It's important for me to balance my academic life with relaxation and hobbies. 对我来说，平衡学业生活和休闲娱乐很重要。 10.Finally， I go to bed at a reasonable hour to ensure I get enough sleep for the next day. 最后，我在合理的时间上床睡觉，以确保第二天有足够的睡眠。 11.示例段落 My typical school day begins with getting up at 6：30 am. After a nutritious breakfast， I rush to school， eager to start my lessons. During morning classes， I concentrate intently， taking notes and asking questions when needed. At recess， I enjoy chatting with friends and playing a quick game of soccer. Lunchtime is a time for socializing and trying out new dishes. In the afternoon， I participate in both academic classes and my favorite extracurricular activity， the science club. After school， I attend the club meeting， where we conduct experiments and discuss fascinating topics. When I get home， I prioritize my homework before studying for exams. Finally， I turn in early to ensure I'm well-rested for the followingday. 我典型的上学日是从早上6：30起床开始的。吃过营养丰富的早餐后，我冲到学校， 渴望开始我的课程。在上午的课上，我集中注意力，做笔记，并在需要的时候提问。课间休息时，我喜欢和朋友聊天，踢一场快速的足球。午餐时间是社交和尝试新菜的时间。 下午，我参加学术课程和我最喜欢的课外活动，科学俱乐部。放学后，我参加社团会议，在那里我们做实验，讨论有趣的话题。当我回到家，我优先考虑我的家庭作业之前学习 考试。最后，我早早上床睡觉，以确保我在第二天得到充分的休息。 这个段落通过具体的时间线和活动，生动地展示了作者上学一天的情况，同时使用了上述的词汇短语和句型，适合作为英语作文写作的参考。
示例段落 1.开头段落：(Introduction) Every day， I wake up early at 6：30 am to start my vibrant school day. It's full of activities that not only educate me but also help me grow and learn new things. I always make sure to plan my day carefully so that I can make the most of every moment. 每天，我早上6点半起床，开始我充满活力的学校生活。它充满了活动，不仅教育 我，而且帮助我成长和学习新事物。我总是确保仔细计划我的一天，这样我就能充分利 用每一刻。 2.中间段落：：(Body)Morning Routine After a quick breakfast， I get dressed and leave for school by 7：30 am. At school， the first
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thing I do is attend the morning assembly where we sing the national anthem and listen to the announcements. Then， it's time for my favorite subject， English， from 8：00 to 9：00 am. I enjoy reading stories and practicing my pronunciation with my classmates. 早上日程 快速吃完早餐后，我穿好衣服，在7：30出发去学校。在学校，我做的第一件事就 是参加晨会，我们唱国歌，听公告。然后，是我最喜欢的科目，英语的时间，从早上8 点到9点。我喜欢读故事，和同学一起练习发音。 Classes and Activities Next， I have Math at 9： 10 am， followed by Science at 10：00 am. Both subjects challenge me and keep me engaged. During lunch break from 12：00 to 1：00 pm， I enjoy chatting with my friends and sharing our food. After lunch， I attend Art class where I can unleash my creativity. Then， it's History from 2：00 to 3：00 pm， teaching me about the past and making me appreciate my present. 课程及活动 接下来，我上午9点10分上数学课，10点上科学课。这两门学科都是对我的挑战， 让我保持专注。在中午12点到下午1点的午休时间，我喜欢和我的朋友聊天，分享我们的食物。午饭后，我参加美术课，在那里我可以释放我的创造力。然后，从下午2点 到3点是历史课，教我关于过去的事情，让我感激我的现在。 In the afternoon， I participate in extracurricular activities. On Mondays and Wednesdays， I join the Book Club to discuss interesting novels. Tuesdays and Thursdays are for Basketball Club， where I practice my skills and make new friends. Fridays are special， as we have a
Science Club where we conduct experiments and explore the world of science. 下午，我参加课外活动。星期一和星期三，我参加读书俱乐部讨论有趣的小说。周二和周四是篮球俱乐部，在那里我练习我的技能和结交新朋友。星期五是特别的，因为我们有一个科学俱乐部，在那里我们进行实验和探索科学的世界。 Ending the Day As the school day winds down， I pack up my books and head back home. Before dinner， I usually spend some time reviewing my notes and preparing for the next day's lessons. After dinner， I might read a book or watch an educational video to broaden my knowledge. 结束一天 放学后，我收拾好书本回家。晚饭前，我通常花一些时间复习我的笔记和准备第二天的课程。晚饭后，我可能会读一本书或看一个教育视频来扩大我的知识。
