2024人教版八年级下册期中书面表达专练
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共7小题，共105分。
1.很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习上，以便有个美好的未来。假如你是图中的学生，你对父母的这种做法是怎么认识的？请用英语写一篇作文。
提示：(1)对图画进行简单描述。
(2)对父母的这一做法，给出合理评判。
(3)写出自己的想法。
词数：100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.Let's Help Our Parents Do Housework要点提示：
1.父母工作繁忙。我们应该分担家务。
2.做家务可以培养独立性。
3.我们可以做的家务有：打扫房间、整理被子、洗餐具、倒垃圾等。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁、词数不少于70个。
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、班级。
3.请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。
注意：(1)语言表达要准确，内容要客观。
(2)80词左右。
参考词汇：balanced diet均衡的饮食；stay up熬夜
The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us. __________________________________________________
4.近年来很多人积极参加各种志愿者活动，为创建“全国文明城市”做出了努力和贡献。作为学生，你也一定做过打扫社区卫生、捡拾公园垃圾、关爱敬老院老人等志愿者活动。请以“One Great Thing about Volunteering”为题，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文。
要点：(1)描述一次你的志愿者经历；
(2)分享你的感受或收获。
One Great Thing about Volunteering
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5.王磊很讨厌做家务，但他的父母经常让他做家务，他为此感到很烦恼。假如你是王磊的美国好友Joe，请你根据以下提示内容给王磊写一封80词左右的信。
提示：(1)做家务可以动手动脑，使人更聪明；
(2)帮父母做家务可以使父母有更多的时间休息放松；
(3)通过做家务，可以学到基本的生活技能（basic life skills）。
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6.假如你叫林琳，你的美国笔友Joe给你写了一封邮件倾诉自己的烦恼。请你根据邮件的内容，给他回一封邮件，帮助他解决烦恼。
Dear Lin Lin,
I am feeling unhappy these days. I don't know why I get angry so easily now. I shouted at my parents last week and had a fight with my best friend yesterday. What should I do Could you give me some advice
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Joe
要求：(1)思路清晰，层次分明。
(2)词数为80左右。
提示词：forgive v. 原谅 solve v. 解决
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7.假如你是Mike，上周日晚上8点时，你们一家人都在做什么呢？请根据下表提示写一篇英语短文进行描述。80词左右。
People Things
Grandmother 看报纸
Father 在电视上看女排比赛
Mother 洗碗
Brother 和朋友在健身房（gym）锻炼
Mike 听音乐
答案和解析
1.【答案】 Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school. I wanted to help my father sweep the floor, but he said, "You needn't do that. Do some reading!" Later when I was watching TV, my mother came and turned off the TV. She said, "Don't watch TV. Go to study!"
I know my parents love me and want me to have a good future. But should I spend all the time on my study There are many other things for me to learn and I want to know more about the outside world, too.
As students, it's our duty to study. But that's not the only thing for us to do.
【解析】略
2.【答案】 ①Helping our parents do housework is one of the best ways to care about them. Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do housework.② If we help them do some housework, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we can. In fact, we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we could make the bed, clean up the room, wash clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash.
Doing housework is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let's help our parents do chores.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题作文，话题为Let's Help Our Parents Do Housework，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be busy with忙于……；
②in fact实际上;
③for examplel例如;
④from now on从现在起
【高分句型】
①Helping our parents do housework is one of the best ways to care about them.（动名词做主语；动词不定式作定语）
②If we help them do some housework, they will have more time to rest.（if引导的条件状语从句；动词不定式作定语）
【结构布局】
引言：说明帮助父母做家务是照顾他们的最好方式之一
正文：介绍做家务的益处
结尾：呼吁大家帮助父母做家务
3.【答案】The Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important to us. So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy.
We should have a balanced diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. They are good for health. Don't eat too much. And we should exercise a lot every day to keep strong. Also, we should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Remember, it's not good to stay up too late.
If you do as I mentioned above, I am sure we can keep healthy.
【解析】点评：本文运用“总—分—总”写作法客观、详实地介绍了如何保持健康。首先从“健康对于我们大家很重要”入题，从饮食、锻炼和休息三个方面提出了切实可行的建议。文章首尾照应，在最后提出愿望，情态动词多次合理使用，增加了建议的中肯性。
添彩点：It is necessary to...句型的使用，及a balanced diet，be good for，stay up短语的正确使用，祈使句用来表示建议等都给文章增加了亮点。
4.【答案】 One Great Thing about Volunteering
I ever did one great thing about volunteering. I went to the old people's home once. I help them wash their clothes and sweep the floor. I told them about my life and listened to their stories. We talked happily, I stayed there for 3 hours and deeply realized that it's important to look after the old and respect them. ① I had a strong feeling of satisfactoin when I saw the look of joy on their faces.
② Though I was tired, I felt so proud of myself. Volunteering in the old people's home is a great experience for me.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文时态以一般现在时为主。要覆盖所有内容要点。尽可能应用较多的语法结构和词汇。为使文章增色，可使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。以达到预期的写作目的。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；
②listen to听；
③look after照顾
【高分句型】
①I had a strong feeling when I saw the look of joy on their faces.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Though I was tired, I felt so proud of myself. （though引导的让步状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：描述一次自己的志愿者经历
结尾：分享自己的感受或收获
5.【答案】Dear Wang Lei,
I'm writing to talk to you about the chores. You think doing chores is boring, but I don't think so. When you are doing chores, you use your hands and mind. This can make you smarter. And your parents are busy working all day. If you help them do chores, they can have more time to relax. Besides, it is necessary for us to learn some basic like skills, such as cooking and doing the dishes. Do you think so
Yours,
Joe
【解析】【思路点拨】
考生首先要认真审题，仔细阅读提示，确定文章中心。本文主要以Joe的语气给好朋友王磊写一封信。应用一般现在时介绍帮助父母做家务活的好处。应包括所给要点，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。
【亮点短语】
1.it is necessary for 有必要做...；
2.such as 例如。
【高分句型】
Besides, it is necessary for us to learn some basic like skills, such as cooking and doing the dishes. 除此之外，我们还有必要学习一些基本的技能，例如做饭和一盘子，besides用来转折。
6.【答案】Dear Joe,
I am glad to hear from you, but I'm sorry to hear about your problems. I think you should say sorry to your parents and your best friend. Your family and your true friendare always with you. You can tell them about your problems. I think they will forgive you and help you to solve them. Also, you can listen to soft music when you get angry. It can help you relax. Hope things work out.
Yours,
Lin Lin
【解析】点评：本文运用了“I-O-W”三步法的写作技巧。第一步：Introduction——在邮件开头引入话题（hear about your problems）；第二步：Opinions——给出具体建议（第二至第七句）；第三步：Wishes——提出愿望（最后一句）。
7.【答案】Hello, I am Mike. Last Sunday, all my family were at home except my brother. At 8:00 p.m., we were doing different things. My grandmother was reading a newspaper. This is what she usually does at this time of a day. My father was watching women s volleyball game on TV. My mother was doing the dishes in the kitchen. What was my brother doing Oh, he was exercising in the gym with friends. What about me I was listening to music at that time.
【解析】[思路点拨]
1．体裁：记叙文。
2．人称：以第三人称为主。
3．时态：以过去进行时和一般过去时为主。
4．思路：首先点明主题人物是谁；接着陈述事情发生的时间和地点；然后用适当的时态描述具体的动作。
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