应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信限时练
1、假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。
注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise.
Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at home to go over my lessons. You know, I didn’t do well in the last exam. So I want to devote all my spare time to working on my lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam.
I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. Sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【提分词汇】
break my promise 打破诺言
do well in 在...做得好
devote... to doing sth.致力于做...
get good scores 取得高分数
【亮点句型】
I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. .很抱歉，我不能按照我们上周的计划在星期天上午和你一起去书店了。
Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. 这就是我不能和你一起去书店的原因。
So I want to devote all my spare time to working on my lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam. 所以我想把我所有的业余时间都用来学习我的功课，以便在期末考试中取得好成绩。
2．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:
1. 向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3. 请求他的原谅。
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Dylan，
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Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Dylan,
I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday. I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long.
Next time, I’ll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled, or even ahead of schedule.
I humbly ask your forgiveness. I hope my mistake won’t prevent you from seeking my help in the future. I’m always happy to be of service.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作步骤】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封道歉信：假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:1. 向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3. 请求他的原谅。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； apologize（道歉），humbly（谦逊地），forgiveness（原谅），mistake（错误）， prevent（阻止）及seek（寻求）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【写作亮点】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有on time（按时），pick up sb（接某人），make sure (确保)，in order to（为了……），as scheduled（按照预定时间）及ahead of（提前），而且还使用了宾语从句“I hope my mistake won’t prevent you from seeking my help in the future.”，非谓语动词“I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday.”及“I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
3、假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus
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【范文】
Dear Medical workers，
I am Li Hua,a high middle school student in Shanxi. I'm writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your
devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona Virus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately
rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It's widely believed that our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching,
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Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up from the bottom of my heart.(要点一) Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties(要点二) and the pride in your eyes when I achieved my goals(要点三). Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.
Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you disappointed. I love you, Father(要点四)!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作步骤】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：bringing sb up,be faced with, achieve one’s goal, be determined to do sth 等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【写作亮点】
本篇范文语言优美，情真意切。其中使用了一些高级句型让人眼前一亮。如：“Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties”否定词位于句首的倒装句，增强语气。“Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.”虚拟语气，渲染气氛。这些句型是使用大大增强了本文的感染力，可供大家借鉴。
5、假设你是李华，你本来计划周六下午要去参加好朋友Tom生日晚会，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 祝福他生日快乐。
注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
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Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you
I’m terribly sorry that I’m not able to go to your birthday party this Saturday afternoon. I’m in Beijing now because my mother is seriously ill and will have an operation here. She is in bad need of my care these days, so I’m staying here to take care of her in the hospital.
I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well with the party. By the way, I have sent you the latest CD of Xu Song. I hope you’ll like this birthday present.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
19应用文写作之道歉信和感谢信限时练
1、假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。
注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望。 请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下:
1. 向他表示道歉; 2. 表达你对此事的认识; 3. 请求他的原谅。
注意:1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Dylan，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
3、假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意；2. 个人感受；3. 表达信心。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus
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4．你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching,
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5、假设你是李华，你本来计划周六下午要去参加好朋友Tom生日晚会，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 祝福他生日快乐。
注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
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