牛津上海版八年级上学期期末复习
期末必考单元话题满分范文20篇
一、书面表达
1．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An important decision”，请以“一个重要的决定”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
成长的过程中，我们需要做出各种各样的决定。有些决定甚至会对你的人生产生深远的影响。请简述你曾经做过的一个重要的决定并谈谈这个决定对你的影响。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
decide to …
try my best to …
I hope that …
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【答案】范文
An important decision
In life people make many important decisions. Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.
My latest decision was made when I entered Junior 3 in Miss Zhang’s English class. Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and write down some important notes. But I was never a good listener. I went on my own way ignoring her suggestion completely until Miss Zhang had a talk with me. She made me realize the importance of not taking notes. Then I decided to follow her to take notes in her class. Since then, my English has improved greatly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：简述曾经做过的一个重要的决定并谈谈这个决定对自己的影响；注意条理清晰，逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述人生充满各种重要的决定，而正确的决定对我们影响巨大；
第二步，讲述自己曾做过的一个重要决定，以及这个决定对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at 擅长
②write down 写下
③on one’s own way 以某人自己的方式
[高分句型]
①Right decisions are so important that they affect us greatly.（结果状语从句）
②Since I was not good at English, Miss Zhang asked me to listen attentively in class and write down some important notes. （since引导的原因状语从句）
2．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ moment” （请以“一个……的瞬间”为题，写至少60个词的短文，标点符号不占格，请在答题纸上先把作文标题补充完整。）
提示：在你的学习生活中，一定曾有过某个瞬间让你记忆犹新，或是快乐雀跃的，或是难以忘怀的，亦或是伤心失望的，请结合自己的经历分享这一个时刻吧！
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
An unforgettable moment
There is a big playground in our school, which is large and beautiful against the grass. I’m fond of it. Therefore, I always go there for a walk when disappointed.
Last week, I failed the mid-exam, so I was very sad. In order to relax myself, this morning I went to the ground alone. There, I saw a boy take exercise running faster and faster. With a bad mood, I could do nothing but look at him. Suddenly, he fell down. To my great surprise, he got on his feet quickly and went on running. A few minutes later, when he got close to me, seeing the sweat on his face, I was struck by him deeply.
Just at that moment, the sky became bright and I felt more confident. I went to class and still worked hard for my dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：主要是一般过去时；
③提示：考生应注意文章应主要采用一般过去时态，结合自身经历来描写某个瞬间。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描写这个瞬间发生的地点；
第二步，具体阐述这个瞬间发生的过程。从“起因，人物，结果”等方面阐述这个瞬间发生的过程；
第三步，说明这个瞬间对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①disappointed失望的
②in order to为了
③suddenly突然
④to one’s great surprise令人惊讶的是
⑤go on doing sth.继续做某事
⑥bright明亮的
⑦confident自信的
[高分句型]
①In order to relax myself, this morning I went to the ground alone.（in order to引导的目的状语从句）
②There, I saw a boy take exercise running faster and faster.（比较级+and+比较级）
③A few minutes later, when he got close to me, seeing the sweat on his face, I was struck by him deeply.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Our fourteenth birthday”(以“我们的十四岁生日”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
1. What kind of activities will you arrange for your classmates
2. What will you say to your parents, teachers and friends
3. What’s your expectation for the birthday
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【答案】例文
Our fourteenth birthday
My fourteenth birthday is quite unusual for me. I used to have a birthday party with my parents. But this time I will spend my fourteenth birthday with my parents, all my classmates and teachers. I will decorate my house with some flowers and balloons. At the party, I will share my birthday cake with them.I will sing and play games with my classmates. I will say thank you to my parents, teachers and friends. I hope we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简介生日的到来；
第二步，介绍生日的相关内容，如和谁一起庆祝、安排的活动以及表示感谢；
第三步，希望大家能玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
say thank you to sb. 对某人表示感谢
have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
I hope we will have a good time. （省略that的宾语从句）
4．Besides working together with teammates in a football team, it is necessary for us to cooperate with others such as your classmates and parents to finish a tough task in your life. Write at least 60 words about the topic “An experience of working with __________”(在我们的生活中，除了橄榄球比赛中需要团队合作，我们和同学或父母等都会有一起合作完成一项任务的经历，请结合你的自身经历，以《和______的一次合作经历》为题，说说你们的合作过程，以及你的收获，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
An experience of working with teammates
Nowadays, teamwork is very important for us to do a thing well. It is quite often that one person is unable to carry out a job by himself or herself. He or she needs more people to do it together. I have to say that some work can’t be finished without teamwork.
Last week, our class held a basketball match with another class. At first, we were just thinking about our own scores. Later, we talked to each other about how to win the game. We realized the importance of working together. Finally, my teammates and I worked together to win the game.
All in all, teamwork is very important not only now but also in the future. If we do a good job together, we can win in the end. If we don’t do it together, we may be defeated by our competing team.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应围绕主题叙述，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，把题目补完整；
第二步，介绍团队合作的重要性；
第三步，结合自身经历具体谈一谈。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out实行
②the importance of……的重要性
③all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①I have to say that some work can’t be finished without teamwork.（that引导宾语从句）
②If we don’t do it together, we may be defeated by our competing team.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中喜欢的美好事物以及喜欢的理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最喜欢的人是王老师。
第二步，具体阐述喜欢王老师的理由。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“爱王老师”的想法，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with对……严格
② in a word总之
③ be always ready to help others乐于助人
④ in trouble处于困难中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的宾语从句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴随）
6．Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What do you do at school every day
2. Why do you think it is a busy day
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【答案】例文
I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school.
I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school.
After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌；
第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①have sports进行体育锻炼
②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生
③so...that...太……以致于……
④go over复习
[高分句型]
①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句）
②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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【答案】例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句点题，说明最钦佩的人是妈妈；
第二步，具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因；
第三步，最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honesty is the best policy诚实为上策
②try to do sth尽量去做某事
③give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引导让步状语从句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with复合结构）
8．Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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【答案】范文：
I want to say thanks to my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想对谁说感谢以及你想感谢他/她的理由，至少说出两条。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
9．In 60-100 words, write a story to go along with the given pictures. (根据所给图片和标题，合理发挥想象，用 60 至 100 个词写一个故事。故事开头已给。标点符号不占格)
My noisy neighbour
Last Sunday, my neighbour had a home party with her friends.
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【答案】例文：
My noisy neighbour
Last Sunday, my neighbour had a home party with her friends. The party began from 5:00 p.m. They sang, danced and laughed loudly. At 11:30 p.m. the party still continued. I couldn’t stand it, so I knocked at her door. I told her it was midnight and let her keep quiet. But she just ignored me. Finally, I called the police for help. With the help of the policemen, the party ended. And next morning, my neighbour apologized to me for what happened last night. I told her that it’s everyone’s job to protect the community.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据所给图片编写一个故事。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。按照图片显示内容，合理编写一个故事，逻辑要紧密，注意时态的用法，保证无词汇和语法错误。
10．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I want to do during this winter holiday ”. (以“今年寒假我想做的事”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following points as reference. （以下问题可供参考）
1. What are the things you want to do during this winter holiday
2. What do you like to do most Why
（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文：
Things I want to do during this winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. So I can do the things that I’d like to do, such as playing computer games, playing football and traveling. The thing I want to do best is playing basketball. I love playing basketball for many reasons. I love playing basketball because it makes me feel cool. I can also meet a lot of friends when I play basketball and I can play with them together. Playing basketball can make me grow taller as well. That’s why I love playing basketball during the winter holiday.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出寒假自己想做的事及理由，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来描述内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
11．Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic “I learned to be _______ through a school activity”
开学以来，学校开展了许多活动，如：夸夸我的好家长；校庆170周年等，请你以“通过一次学校活动我学会了……”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2. 短文中不得出现真实人名，班级及其他相关信息。
【答案】例文
I learned to be self-governed through a school activity
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 13 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Linyi and we needed to live in an apartment for a week. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly and had breakfast soon. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. We sang and danced together and did all kinds of activities. Every day, we had to practice more than six hours.
Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is! I learned lots of things. Especially, I learned to be self-governed through the school activity.
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“learned to be … through a school activity”为题写一篇短文。首先需要把题目补充完整，然后再列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；
写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。文章要围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
12．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “… brings me happiness” (以“… brings me happiness”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
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【答案】例文：
Reading brings me happiness
My life is full of happiness because of reading. It brings me a lot of knowledge as well as plenty of improvement. Besides, reading can reduce my time on watching TV and playing computer games. I can spend more time on my subjects. What’s more, reading is also extremely necessary in my study life, with which I can make great progress. All in all, reading has brought me so much happiness that I can hardly stop reading. I strongly recommend you to read more books and get more useful information.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题写作，这个题目要求我们将标题补充完整，并围绕“……带给我快乐”这个主题结合自身经历写一篇不少于60字的短文。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时应用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。注意格式规范，符合语境表达。第二点：内容上写作者需要结合自身经历来谈谈给自己带来快乐的是什么、如何带给自己快乐以及自己的想法。第三点：文章要选用合适的连词、短语和句型来进行串联和拓展，如besides；as well as；what’s more；all in all等。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
13．Write at least 60 words about the topic“My winter holiday plan”.（请以“我的寒假计划”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
提示：大家期盼的寒假即将到来，也将迎来春节。假期里，大家可以和家人、朋友一起尽情地放松，或通过读课外书、去旅游等来增长自己的见识，也可以努力学习弥补本学期中学习上的不足，……。你是否对即将到来的假期有所计划呢？
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名，否则不予评分；
2. 逻辑清楚，行文流畅，语句通顺。
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【答案】例文
My winter holiday plan
I want to travel to Hongkong in the coming winter holiday. In fact, I have been looking forward to visiting Hongkong for quite a long time. One reason is that there is a famous Disneyland in Hongkong. I want to have a good look at different cartoon characters and enjoy the wonderful musicals there. Besides, I want to visit the Ocean Park, too. I can see many kinds of animals in the sea. I can’t wait to go to Hongkong.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。介绍自己的寒假计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称。先介绍自己的寒假计划，接下来介绍打算去香港的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．Write a short passage of at least 55 words about the topic "A successful experience".
（以“一次成功的经历”为题写一篇不少于55个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the suggested questions as clues:（以下问题仅供参考）
λ When did you have your successful experience
λ How did it happen （Please write in detail）
λ What have you learnt from the experience
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【答案】例文：
A successful experience
I can still remember the sports meeting when I was in middle school. I took part in the 800-meter race on that day. At first, I was afraid of running. I thought I could not finish such a long distance. I wanted to give up. At this time, my classmates encouraged me. So I tried my best to run. At last, I was the second to finish. Although I was not the first one, I thought I finished the race, and this was a success for me.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我的成功经历发生的时间；接下来介绍事情发生的过程；最后介绍我从这次经历中学到的东西。
2.例文分析：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般过去时叙述我的经历，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take part in，be afraid of，give up，try one’s best to do，at last。
句型：时间状语从句when I was in middle school；宾语从句I could not finish such a long distance；让步状语从句Although I was not the first one。
15．Write at least 60 words on the topic ‘ Great changes in Shanghai’.（以“上海的巨大变化”为题写话, 字数不少于60字）
How was Shanghai several years ago
How is it now
【答案】Great changes in Shanghai
With the development of science and technology,great changes have taken place in Shanghai.
Many years ago, there used to be narrow and old bridges,roads and houses in Shanghai.But now we can find long bridges,wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere.People live in Shanghai used to be live in small houses in narrow streets,but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments.we can see grass,lakes and parks here and there.
As the member of Shanghai,I am proud of these changes.We are sure that the tomorrow of Shanghai will be better.
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目主要写上海的过去与现在的变化。
2、例文分析：第一段写社会与技术的发展，上海发生了许多变化引出下文；第二段通过上海今昔对比来描述变化；最后一段总结，希望上海这个城市越来越好。描述过去时用一般过去时；描述现在用一般现在时；表达美好的愿望时，用一般将来时。
3、高分亮点：
短语：take place；here and there；used to do；be proud of…。
句型：there used to be句型；with复合结构；be sure that+从句。
【分析】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如take place；here and there；used to do；be proud of…以及宾语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
16．Writing（作文）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “An Unusual Experience”（以《一次非同寻常的经历》为题写一篇作文，不少于60词）
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【答案】An Unusual Experience
Everyone has his own unusual experience. I would like to share my experience.
Last year, I went to ski with my friend, Li Mei. We were playing happily on the ice when I heard a shout “Help”. I turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into an ice hole. But neither of us could swim. So Li Mei and I ran to ask for help. A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. What an unusual experience it was!
【详解】1. 题干解读：这个题目要求我们以An Unusual Experience为题，介绍自己的一次不寻常的经历。是一个话题作文，题目只给了作文的标题，而并没有规定具体的写作内容，所以学生们应发挥自己的想象力，联系自己的日常生活，讲述自己的一次不寻常的经历。注意题目，叙述的经历应体现“不寻常”的特点。文章应以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。
2. 例文分析：短文是一篇优秀的作文，作者叙述了自己生活中一次救人的经历。文章按照事情发展顺序记叙，叙述清晰、有条理。文章使用了一般过去时态、第一人称叙述，符合表达需要。谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。句式结构完整，使用了简单句、并列句和复合句，句式多变，文意连贯、表达流畅。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：would like to；went skiing；turned back；fall into；ask for help；pulled…out of。
句型：We were playing happily on the ice when I heard a shout “Help”.；I turned back and was surprised to see a boy falling into an ice hole.；A few minutes later, a policeman came and pulled the boy out of the water. ；What an unusual experience it was!
【分析】这是一个话题作文，要求记叙一次不寻常的经历。写作中有两个难点：第一个是题目中并没有给出具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的实际生活，选取生活中具体的一个事例，用正确的英语表达出来。例文中作者选取了在滑雪的时候救人的一次经历，能体现题目中叙述“不寻常”经历的要求，内容叙述完整、过程清晰。第二个难点就是英语的表达问题，注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。例文中使用了丰富的句型，简单句、并列句、复合句都有，文章表达有节奏感，文意连贯、表达流畅。
17．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格）
帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
A helping hand I gave
Helping others brings me happiness and makes my life meaningful. I grow up a lot by helping others.
I am good at English and can always get good grades in English exams. Then one day, my best friend Tina asked me to help her with her English. So I shared some useful ways to learn English. Each time she has trouble with her homework, I’ll try my best to explain as clearly as possible. I’m glad that Tina has made great progress in English.
I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction when helping others. It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助；
第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。
[亮点词汇]
①get good grades in English exams 英语考试取得好成绩
②try one’s best to do 尽最大努力去……
[高分句型]
It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.(宾语从句)
18．Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “An interesting story in my family” (请以“一件家庭趣事”为题写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
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【答案】例文
An interesting story in my family
My father is a doctor. Sometimes he works so hard that he can’t remember the date.
One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before. So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry. After my father left, my mother said to me mysteriously, “He will come back soon.” “Why ” I was greatly surprised. “Because today is Sunday, his holiday!” Just as mother said, my father came back home soon, and went to bed again, because he was too tired.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据An interesting story in my family为题，可围绕家庭生活展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍作者的家庭成员、职业及性格等；
第二步，简述一件家庭趣事发生的背景、起因和过程等，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
[亮点词汇]
①so…that如此……以至于
②set the alarm定闹铃
③in a hurry匆忙
[高分句型]
①One day, my father wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn’t able to do that, because he hadn’t set the alarm clock the night before.（because引导原因状语从句）
②So when he got up, he did everything in a hurry.（when引导时间状语从句）
19．Write a composition in at least 60 words according to the situation given.（根据所给情景写一篇短文，字数不少于60词。）
Situation: Suppose your class are having a discussion about what kind of pen friend you would like to have. Please write about your opinions and give reasons.（假设你们班里正在进行一项讨论，主题是关于希望拥有怎样的笔友，请谈谈你的想法和理由。）
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【答案】例文：
All kinds of friends play an important role in our life. I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties. Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger. A friend in need is a friend indeed. There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again. I wish I will have such a pen friend in the near future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕主题进行发挥，适当拓展，注意语言流畅，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述朋友的重要性；
第二步，讲述自己想要拥有的笔友是怎么样的；
第三步，表达希望能拥有这样的笔友。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中起重要作用
②be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
③cheer up振作起来
[高分句型]
①I am willing to have such a pen friend who shares the same interests with me and has a kind personality so that we can encourage each other when facing difficulties.（who引导的限制性定语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句）
②Although we can’t meet frequently, we still can exchange our ideas happily if we have the same interests and can talk about something we both like, which makes our friendship stronger.（although引导的让步状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
③There is no doubt that when I am in trouble, my pen friend’s comfort and advice will help me cheer up again.（that引导的同位语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
20．Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考）
1. When and where did it happen
2. What happened
3. How did you feel about it
4. Why did you think so
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【答案】例文：
A successful experience in my life
In my memory, there are full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened at school last term.
I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn’t get good marks in exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now I have done better in my study.
I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述经历用“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要描述什么样的经历及发生的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了这次经历的过程；
第三步，描述自己的感受和启发。
[亮点词汇]
①are full of充满
②the most unforgettable one最难以忘怀的
③difficulty困难
④overcome克服
[高分句型]
①I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. （比较级）
②Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. （让步状语从句）
