2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第二册同步
Part 4 Writing
生存故事
写作题目
请根据以下内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,介绍你在一次地震中的逃生经历,要点如下:
1.时间:昨天晚上;
2.事件发生的过程:地震来袭时,你正在做家庭作业,突然感觉房间在摇晃,一些书从书架上落下来,所以你推测是发生了地震。你听到人们在大声喊叫,便急忙和父母一起下楼;
3.结果:地震过后,建筑和人们都安然无恙。
思路点拨
主题 生存故事 体裁 记叙文
布局 首先介绍地震发生的时间,然后详细描述地震发生时周围事物的变化以及人们的表现,最后简要说明一下地震后的情况。
人称 第一人称、第三人称 时态 一般过去时
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adv.在室内
2. adj.极其可怕的
3. v.推断,推定
4. 在此期间;与此同时
5. 彻底摧毁,消灭
答案 1.indoors 2.terrifying 3.infer 4.in the meantime 5.wipe out
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:地震发生的时间
(1)昨晚我正在做作业。
I my homework last night.
第二部分:地震发生时周围事物的变化和人们的表现
(2)我感觉到房间的震动。
I felt .
(3)震动导致一些书从室内的书架上掉到地板上。
The shake onto the floor from the bookshelf .
(4)震动是如此的可怕,所以我推测是发生地震了。
The shake I it was an earthquake.
(5)与此同时,我听到一些人在喊:“地震!地震!”
, I , “Earthquake! Earthquake!”
第三部分:地震后的情况
(6)幸运的是,地震并不强烈,没有摧毁这栋楼房。
Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough the building.
答案 (1)was doing (2)the shake of my room (3)caused some books to fall;indoors (4)was so terrifying that;inferred that (5)In the meantime;heard some people shouting (6) to wipe out
2.句式升级
(7)用关系代词which合并句(2)和句(3)
(8)用when合并句(1)和句(7)
答案 (7)I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors.
(8)I was doing my homework last night when I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors.
连句成篇
参考范文
I was doing my homework last night when I felt the shake of my room, which caused some books to fall onto the floor from the bookshelf indoors. The shake was so terrifying that I inferred that it was an earthquake. In the meantime, I heard some people shouting, “Earthquake! Earthquake!” I quickly went into my parents’ bedroom and we went downstairs in a hurry together. Luckily, the earthquake was not strong enough to wipe out the building. The building was still there and everyone in the building was safe.
写作积累
(一)增色词汇
1.整体介绍:activity; wilderness; adventure; journey; skill; improve; take part in...
2.介绍过程:solve; succeed; overcome; expose; struggle; lack; rescue; send; feed; encourage; set off; get lost; run out (of); give up; go through; go hungry; search for; deal with; return to...
3.个人感受:realise; meaningful; unforgettable; memorable; enrich; benefit from; be of great help
(二)精彩句型
1. terrible storm hit/struck...一场可怕的暴风雨袭击了……
2.It was a cool autumn night when the accident happened.事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。
3.With the help of the rescue team, people who were trapped in the flood were saved.在救援队的帮助下,被困在洪水中的人们得救了。
4.Because of/As a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately.因为/由于/多亏有军队的帮助,受伤的人们立即被送到了医院。
5.In a word, I believe we will rebuild a new city.总之,我相信我们将重建一个新城市。
实战演练
假定你是李华,你上周参加了一次野外生存(wilderness survival)体验活动。请写一篇短文介绍你的体验过程,内容包括:
1.活动的时间、地点;
2.活动过程中你遇到的困难以及是如何克服的;
3.活动带给你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Last week, I participated in a wilderness survival activity in a camp. Before the activity, participants were organized separately, meaning we had to cope with any emergency on our own. As for me, the largest challenge was my fear of snakes. I lay in my tent the whole night awake, trying to get rid of the fear which was always surrounding me. The next morning, I felt tired and sleepy, but I further realised the importance of being brave and confident. Finally, I succeeded in finishing all the tasks given to me.
All in all,I believe I will never forget this meaningful experience.
1.重点词汇
①participate in 参加
②separately adv.分别地;单独地
③emergency n.紧急情况
④challenge n.挑战
⑤succeed in 在……方面取得成功
2.亮点句型
①Before the activity, participants were organized separately, meaning we had to cope with any emergency on our own.(现在分词短语作结果状语)活动开始前,参与者被单独安排开,这意味着我们必须独自应对任何紧急情况。
②I lay in my tent the whole night awake, trying to get rid of the fear which was always surrounding me.(现在分词短语作伴随状语;which引导定语从句)我在帐篷里躺着,一夜没睡,试图摆脱一直笼罩着我的恐惧。
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