2024外研版高中英语必修第三册同步
Part 4 Writing
安全指南
写作题目
假设你是李华,你将以“Flood Safety Guidelines”为题就如何在洪水中自救写一篇洪水安全指南,内容包括:
1.洪水到来前要做的事情;
2.洪水发生时要做的事情;
3.洪水发生时不能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当补充细节,以使行文连贯。
Flood Safety Guidelines
思路点拨
主题 洪水安全指南 体裁 说明文
布局 第一部分:简述洪水的危害并引出要说明的主题; 第二部分:详细说明洪水到来前和发生时应采取的措施。可以采用列举法、对比法等进行阐述。
人称 以第二人称为主 时态 一般现在时
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. n.灾难
2. n.预报
3. adv.即刻,马上
4. n.紧急情况
5. v.抓住
6. n.所有物;财产
答案 1.disaster 2.forecast
3.immediately 4.emergency 5.grab
6.property
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:简述洪水的危害并引出要说明的主题
(1)洪水是最危险的自然灾害之一。
Flood is one of the most dangerous .
第二部分:详细说明洪水到来前和发生时应采取的措施
(2)立刻转移到安全的地方。
Move to .
(3)有紧急情况。
There is .
(4)如果你在水里,抓住一棵树或者一块木板。
or a wood block if you are in water.
(5)不要带太多的个人财物。
Do not take too much .
答案 (1)natural disasters
(2)a safe place immediately
(3)an emergency
(4)Grab a tree
(5)personal property
2.句式升级
(6)将句(2)和句(3)合并为含有条件状语从句的句子
答案 (6)Move to a safe place immediately if there is an emergency.
连句成篇
Flood Safety Guidelines
参考范文
Flood Safety Guidelines
Flood is one of the most dangerous natural disasters. Here are some tips on flood safety.
Things to do before a flood:
Listen to the weather forecast.
Move to a safe place immediately if there is an emergency.
Prepare enough food and clean water.
Things to do during a flood:
Try to move to a place high enough to keep clear of floodwater.
Grab a tree or a wood block if you are in water.
Things not to do during a flood:
Do not drink floodwater.
Do not take too much personal property.
Never give up hope.
写作积累
(一)增色词汇
1.描述主题:occur, cause, serious, tip, measure, reduce, loss, hurricane, earthquake, landslide, tsunami, typhoon, blizzard, natural disaster...
2.具体措施:breathe, hold, leave, touch, wait, prepare, rescue, survive, medicine, towel, exit, entrance, shelter, candle, gas, dangerous, worried, optimistic, keep calm, stay away from, find the way out, turn off, run out of, make use of, get in touch with, sufficient food and water...
3.总结:advise, avoid, damage, suggest, in a word, as long as, keep in mind that...
(二)精彩句型
1.Otherwise, we can't easily deal with...in the face of...否则,面对……的时候我们不能轻松地处理……
2.Here are some tips on...这里有一些关于……的建议。
3.It is important to move to...to stay away from...重要的是要转移到……,以远离……
4.Whatever happens, never...无论发生什么,绝不能……
5.Every year, many people lose their lives because of..., making it necessary to...每年,许多人因为……而失去生命。因此有必要……
6.Find something as a temporary shelter, such as...找一些东西作为临时庇护所,比如……
7.Stay inside with all the windows and doors closed until...待在室内,门窗紧闭,直到……
8.More importantly, prepare enough water and food before...so that...更重要的是,在……之前准备足够的水和食物,以便……
实战演练
假定你是某国际中学的学生李华,你们学校最近正在开展主题为“提高灾害预防能力,构建生命安全线”的安全教育活动。请你用英语写一份关于如何在火灾中逃生的安全指南,内容包括:
1.火灾的危害;
2.逃生方法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 6 Disaster and hope
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Every year, thousands of people lose their lives in fires, so it's very necessary to know some tips on how to survive a fire. The following tips may be helpful to you.
First, you should keep calm so that you can make wise decisions in dangerous situations. Second, cover your nose with a wet towel or a piece of wet clothing. Third, while getting away from the scene, you should run downstairs instead of taking a lift. Last but not least, when you can't find any way out, go to the toilet and wet its door, windows and all burnable objects. And at the same time, try to get in touch with people outside to ask for help.
Although fires are terrible, we can greatly increase our chances of survival as long as we stay calm and take effective action.
1.重点词汇
①keep calm保持冷静
②last but not least最后但同样重要的是
③get in touch with与……取得联系
④survival n.生存;存活
⑤effective adj.产生预期结果的;有效的
⑥take action采取行动
2.亮点句型
Although fires are terrible, we can greatly increase our chances of survival as long as we stay calm and take effective action.(Although引导让步状语从句;as long as引导条件状语从句)尽管火灾很可怕,但只要我们保持冷静并采取有效行动,就可以大大增加我们的生存机会。
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