Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are 写作 专练（含解析）人教新目标（Go for it）版 英语九年级全册
1．书面表达
践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题，写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例（时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法）；
2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议（至少两点）。
注意：1. 词数100词左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数。2. 不能出现自己真实姓名。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. _______________________
2．请根据下面Linda信中提出的困惑，以读者Mei的名义为她写一封80词左右的回信，帮她解决问题。
Dear Editor,
I had my ears pierced without asking for permission from my mother, and she is angry with me now. She can’t accept the fact that teenagers get their ears pierced. I think it isn’t a big deal for me to do this. I argued with my mother and we were both unhappy. Can you tell me how to solve this problem
Linda
Dear Linda,
I read your problem from the Newsletter. In my opinion，
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Good luck to you!
Mei
3．书面表达
提示：明天，又是一个新的开始。你有什么新的打算吗？是做运动，帮助别人，还是学习……请以“Tomorrow I Will ”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 补全所给题目（例如：Tomorrow I Will Do Sports/Help Others/Study…），短文词数不少于60个。
2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
5. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不给分.
4．假如你是一名警察，一位名叫布朗的美国人向你问路，他需要到超市购买一个旅行包，但他不知道怎么走。你告诉他沿着你们所在的那条街道一直向前走，在第三个路口向左拐入朝阳路，然后乘坐114路公交车，到崇文街下车，然后向右走就能找到一家超市。它在一家饭店和一个银行之间。请根据以上信息写一篇短文，告诉布朗先生具体的路线。
要求：
1. 短文须包含以上全部信息；
2. 可以适当发挥，使行文流畅；
3. 60词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．书面表达
近年来校园安全问题越来越引起人们的关注，建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们不仅要注意自己的人身安全，更应该珍惜自己和他人的生命。请你根据下列表格，就安全问题写一封约90词的演讲稿，并谈谈自己的想法。
课堂安全 体育课或游泳课听老师的口令 刀具类东西不允许带到学校
课间安全 下课不做危险游戏 课间不相互追逐打架 不欺负（bully）个子矮小的同学
心理安全 学习压力过大时通过听音乐等方式放松
你的意见 校园安全还需要注意什么？请自拟至少两点。
注意 1. 词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。
Hello, teachers and schoolmates. It’s my honour to be here and talk about my views about how to keep safe at school.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks a lot.
6．根据要求完成小作文，词数40词。
怎样度周末？
7．假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往翠湖公园的路线，并简单介绍一下公园的情况。
要点提示：1.路线（见上图）；
2.公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等；
3.……
要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．请根据下图提示写一篇短文，告诉你的好友安妮去先锋书店的路线。
要求：1.短文须包括图片的主要信息，语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数60左右。
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9．假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。
①路线(见下图)
②公园环境优美、凉爽，还可以游泳、野餐等；
要求：①词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
10．假如叫你李华，你的笔友Tom打算下周来你的学校参观，但是他不知道该怎么走。请你给他写一封信告知他学校的路。90词左右。
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参考答案：
1．Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Monday morning, I went to school with my classmate Liu Tao by bus. There were many people on the bus. When an old woman got on the bus at the next stop, Liu Tao stood up and gave his seat to her. The old woman thanked Liu Tao for his kindness. I thought Liu Tao was very polite.
But sometimes I see some bad manners around us. For example, some people push in before others or drop litter everywhere.
As a student, we should behave well when we are in public places. And we should give a helping hand when we see someone in need.
【分析】本文是一篇话题作文。
【详解】根据题目要求“践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题，写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例（时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法）；2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议（至少两点）。”可知，文章用一般现在时和一般过去时。人称是第三人称和第一人称。
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。
第二部分：文章主体——叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例（时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法）。——我在一次坐公交车途中，看到给别人让座的文明行为。
注意这一部分用用一般过去时。人称是第三人称。
第三部分：总结全文——呼吁大家要践行文明礼仪从我做起。伸出援助之手。
2．Dear Linda,
I read your problem from the Newsletter. In my opinion, it is silly to argue with your mother. I used to have the same kind of problem as you. I used to wear ripped jeans and my parents disliked them. I showed them some pictures of teens wearing ripped jeans from magazines, and I told them my ideas about clothes. Finally they accepted the fact that I am no longer a child and I needed them to respect my choice.
Arguing is not helpful. Try to talk with your parents in a friendly way. Good luck to you!
Mei
【详解】此题重点考查学生能否用英语表达自己的观点。语句是否通顺，观点是否明确。
3． Tomorrow I Will Do Sports
Tomorrow is a new beginning. I have planned for my health. Because I am fat, in order to keep slim,I will do sports every day.After I get up early,I will run for half an hour.Then I will go to school.I have eight lessons a day.After school,I will play basketball with my friends on the playground.After that,I will walk home.On weekends,I will ride a bike with my friends.
【详解】试题分析：短文叙述的是以后的打算，所以句子用一般将来时，因为叙述的是自己的计划，所以句子的主语用第一人称，句子的时态用一般将来时。要注意上下文的衔接，不要出现语法错误。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如： in order to为了；get up起床；play basketball with sb和某人一起打篮球；on the playground在操场； walk home走着回家；ride a bike骑自行车。用了then，after then连接词，使短文衔接的很好。
考点：话题作文。
4．One possible version:
Nice to meet you, Mr. Brown. I am a traffic police. I’m glad to tell you the way to the supermarket. Go along this street and turn left to Chaoyang Street at the third crossing, then take the No. 114 bus there and get off at Chongwen Street. And then you walk to the right. You will find it. It is between a restaurant and a bank. You won’t miss it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。向路人展示如何到超市。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容，仔细介绍去超市的路线。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．Hello, teachers and schoolmates. It’s my honor to be here and talk about my views about how to keep safe at school.
It’s necessary to obey the rules in P.E class or in the swimming pool. We shouldn’t carry anything dangerous with us, like knives. After class, we’d better try our best to guard against any possible danger. Please don’t play dangerous games or chase each other. It’s impolite to bully classmates who are short or small. Sometimes we may also feel stressed. Listening to music and doing some sports will make it easier for us to relax ourselves.
When we are in trouble, we can always ask our teachers for help. I am sure they are willing to offer advice. Besides, posters can be put up to help students know more about how to keep safe at school. If everyone can pay more attention to safety, we are sure to have a safe and wonderful school life.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇命题式作文。本文是一篇，近年来校园安全问题越来越引起人们的关注，建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。
考点：提纲作文
6．I had a wonderfull time this weekend. On saturday morning , I did my homework . In the afternoon I played computer games .On saturday night I watched TV.On Sunday morning I went to the library I read a book . In the afternoon ,I cooked, On Sunday night, I went to a movie.
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍自己周末是怎样度过的。小作者把自己的周末表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I had a wonderfull time this weekend..有一些好的固定短语还有连词。
考点：考查命题类作文。
7．例文
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It’s easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You can also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料内容，指出去翠湖公园的路以及介绍翠湖公园情况。短文的开头已经给出，写作时考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文；其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1．路线；2．公园介绍公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3．其他。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称和第二人称。文章紧扣主题，连句成篇，层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。而且语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：go straight直走，turn right右转，at the first corner在第一个路口，have fun玩的开心。
句型：Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital．本句是用来指路的祈使句，其中含有when引导的时间状语的应用。
The park is really a good place to have fun. 公园真的是个好玩的好地方。本句中的动词不定式to have fun．作为后置定语，修饰place。
8．One possible version:
Hello, Anne! This Saturday morning, we can go and buy English—Chinese dictionaries in Xianfeng Bookshop together. First we need to walk along Huayuan Street and turn right at the first crossing. And then we walk on Long Street. After we walk past a post office, we can turn left to Shanghai Road. Then we can see Xianfeng Bookshop. It’s just across from Jiari Hotel and behind the bank. It’s easy for us to find it.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据所学知识和地图提示进行写作，要求必须包括图片的主要信息，所以选择路线时候要把图片上的道路和建筑物包含在内；注意字数，适当添加开头和结尾。
2.写作指导：根据图片可知本文主语是“You and Anne”，所以写作时主语应该是“we”。根据地图可知，要去先锋书店，需要沿着“Huanyuan Street”直走，然后在第一个路口右转，再沿着 “Long Street”走，经过邮局后左转，最后可以在“Shanghai Road”上，“Jiari Hotel”对面、银行后面找到先锋书店。写作需要的基本表达有：walk along 沿着……走；turn right/left向右转/左转；at the first crossing在第一个十字路口；across from在……对面；behind在……后面。
9．One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
【详解】一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写出去翠湖公园的路线，并简介公园情况。时态可用一般现在时。
二、列举写作要点
1. 去翠湖公园的路线
2. 简介公园情况。公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；
3. 表达祝福的心愿。
三、列出重点短语及句型
far from, It is easy to do sth. go straight, turn left, at the first corner, on your right, across from, have fun, play games, have a picnic, enjoy yourselves
10．One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I am so excited to hear that you are coming to our school. Let me tell you how to get here.
When you get off the train, please walk out of the railway station and go along North Street until you see a red tall building. Then turn left into the South Street. Walk straight down the street and soon you will see a hospital on your right. Then walk on till you reach the end of the street, and you will find our school on your left.
Welcome to our school.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇书信文，假如叫你李华，你的笔友Tom打算下周来你的学校参观，请你给他写一封信告知他学校的路。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，采用第二人称；第一段引起下文，说明自己要向对方介绍如何到学校；第二段详细向对方介绍到学校路线；最后一段表示欢迎对方来到你的学校。保证叙述完整，注意书信格式。
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