专题07 单元主题写作10篇（满分范文）（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
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一、主题写作
1．“双十一”到了，假如你和父母亲准备今晚一起去购物中心购物，请根据下面的表格内容写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们打算购买的物品。
物品 材料 产地 价格
女衬衫 丝绸 中国 100
餐叉 银 德国 5
手提包 皮革(leather) 法国 300
手套 棉 韩国 40
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80—100（首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Singles’ Day, also known as “Double Eleven” is the biggest shopping day in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．广州是一座历史悠久的城市，也是著名的美食之都，而喝早茶更是这座城市独有的传统文化。根据以下提示，给学校校报写一篇英语短文，介绍广州的传统文化——喝早茶。要求 80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入词数。
内容提示：
历史 150多年
时间 每天上午
地点 茶楼饭店，如广州酒家、陶陶居（Taotaoju Restaurant）等
人物 与家人或朋友
食物 茶、传统点心等。
意义 1.享受美食 2.与家人或朋友话家常，增进感情
你的感想 请你补充1-2点
注意：
1. 词数80左右（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括所有要点；
3. 在所提示的要点之外， 要求有适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
4. 短文中不要透露学校和姓名等个人信息。
Morning Tea in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a city with a long history. It’s very famous for its food. Having morning tea is a tradition in Guangzhou. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，有美好的西方童话，从愚公移山到白雪公主，从美猴王到灰姑娘，从后羿射日到皇帝的新装……。人们每每诵读讲述都会倍感鼓舞，深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，你想和大家分享谁的故事呢？现在就动动小手写下来吧！
要求：1.可以从以上提示中选取故事，也可以选自己喜欢的其他故事。
2.内容包括：故事及故事给我们的启迪。
3.不能出现真实的学校名称、人名及其他真实信息。
4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of… with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s the story of … Hope you enjoy it!
4．在我们国家，野生动物，尤其是濒危野生动物一直能得到很好的保护。2021年，我们国家千方百计保护云南亚洲象安全迁徙就是一个很好的例子。请根据以下内容，以“Saving Asian elephants”为题，写一篇介绍及保护亚洲象的英语短文。
Animal 亚洲象
Food 草，树叶，也吃香蕉和甘蔗(sugarcane)
Living places 较热的地方
Description 亚洲最大最壮的陆地动物之一性格友善；极度濒危，数量稀少
Ways to protect Asian elephants 保护森林；不购买象牙(ivory)制品；……(请你自己补充一点)
要求：
1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Saving Asian elephants
How much do you know about Asian elephants Let’s learn more about them.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国文化很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给 Peter 写一封电子邮件介绍中国的糖画，并谈谈你对它的看法。
要点 ：
1. 糖画是中国的传统技艺之一， 始于明代，拥有大约五百年的历史；
2. 以糖为原材料、用简单的工具制作而成；
3. 通常被制成飞禽、走兽和文字等图案，然后粘在竹签上；
4. 既可食用， 又是一种艺术品，深受大人和小孩的喜爱。
5. 你的看法 。
参考词汇 ：糖面 sugar painting 明代 the Ming Dynasty 走兽 beast
要求 ：文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺， 意思连贯 ：80 词左右。
文章开头结尾已给出，不算在字数内 。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’m writing to tell you something about sugar painting.
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I hope you will have the chance to come to China and enjoy sugar painting.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jerry刚来深圳一个月，还有些不习惯。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一下深圳这个城市，帮助他早日融入深圳的当地生活。
要点：
1.深圳是一座义工之城，建议他多参加一些有意义的义工活动。
2.他在深圳可以体会到丰富的中国传统文化，丰富自己的业余生活。
3.任选一点自己再补充（公园之城，运动之都，海滨城市……）。
要求：
1.必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通畅；
4.不少于80词，开头结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Jerry,
I heard that you’ve been in Shenzhen for only one month. Maybe you don’t get used to your life in a new city.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．在上周的实践活动课上，你们班同学对网上购物这一现象进行了调查。你们在某小区抽取了100名年龄在15岁到65岁之间的受访者。下图是此次活动的统计结果。其中，20%的受访者从未有过网上购物的经历，26%的受访者表示经常在网上购物。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容；第二段介绍你自己的购物习惯，并说明理由。
要求：1. 根据信息提示，把握要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名；
3. 词数不少于70。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运
节日 春节等
形式 剪纸、灯笼、红包等
要求：
（1）回信须包含所有提示信息；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等；
（3）70词左右（开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：代表stand for；剪纸paper-cuts；灯笼lanterns；红包red packets
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。
When and where did you buy the mobile phone
What’s wrong with the mobile phone
How would you like to solve the problem
注意事项：
1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
提示词汇： 质量 quality 电池 battery
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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专题07 单元主题写作10篇（满分范文）（详解版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
牛津深圳版期中好题精刷系列资料，助力期中冲刺！
向满分说YES！
一、主题写作
1．“双十一”到了，假如你和父母亲准备今晚一起去购物中心购物，请根据下面的表格内容写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你们打算购买的物品。
物品 材料 产地 价格
女衬衫 丝绸 中国 100
餐叉 银 德国 5
手提包 皮革(leather) 法国 300
手套 棉 韩国 40
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80—100（首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Singles’ Day, also known as “Double Eleven” is the biggest shopping day in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Singles’ Day, also known as “Double Eleven” is the biggest shopping day in China. There are many things on sale today. And I want to buy something at the shopping centre with my parents.
My mother wants to but a blouse made of silk. It is made in China and it is 100. I want to buy a silver fork. It is made in German and it is 5. My father wants to buy a leather handbag. It is made in France and it is 300. And my parents want to buy me a pair of gloves from Korea. It is made of cotton and it is 40.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍打算购买的物品，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己的购物计划；
第二步，具体介绍要买什么物品，物品的材料、产地和价格。
[亮点词汇]
①on sale廉价销售
②want to do想要做
③made of由……制作
④a pair of gloves一副手套
[高分句型]
And I want to buy something at the shopping centre with my parents.（不定式作宾语）
2．广州是一座历史悠久的城市，也是著名的美食之都，而喝早茶更是这座城市独有的传统文化。根据以下提示，给学校校报写一篇英语短文，介绍广州的传统文化——喝早茶。要求 80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入词数。
内容提示：
历史 150多年
时间 每天上午
地点 茶楼饭店，如广州酒家、陶陶居（Taotaoju Restaurant）等
人物 与家人或朋友
食物 茶、传统点心等。
意义 1.享受美食 2.与家人或朋友话家常，增进感情
你的感想 请你补充1-2点
注意：
1. 词数80左右（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括所有要点；
3. 在所提示的要点之外， 要求有适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
4. 短文中不要透露学校和姓名等个人信息。
Morning Tea in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a city with a long history. It’s very famous for its food. Having morning tea is a tradition in Guangzhou. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Guangzhou is a city with a long history. It’s very famous for its food. Having morning tea is a tradition in Guangzhou.
People in Guangzhou started the tradition of having morning tea more than 150 years ago. Now it’s still very popular. Every morning, many people go to restaurants to have morning tea with their family or friends. There are many famous restaurants in Guangzhou, such as the Guangzhou Restaurant, Taotaoju Restaurant and so on. Besides drinking tea, eating dim sum is also an important part. Some of the most popular dim sum are shrimp dumplings, Cha Siu Bao and so on. When people are having morning tea, they not only enjoy the traditional delicious food but also communicate with each other. It’s also a good chance for friends to get together and improve their friendship.
I often have morning tea with my parents at the weekend. It’s a good way for us to relax and share our happiness together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏写作要点。考生应补充1-2点自己的个人感想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍广州人喝早茶传统的历史、时间、地点、人物和食物等；
第二步，介绍喝早茶的意义；
第三步，表达自己对喝早茶的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①the tradition of……的传统
②more than超过，多于
③such as例如
④and so on等等
⑤not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Besides drinking tea, eating dim sum is also an important part.（动名词作主语）
②When people are having morning tea, they not only enjoy the traditional delicious food but also communicate with each other. （when引导时间状语从句）
③It’s also a good chance for friends to get together and improve their friendship.（固定句式：It’s+名词/形容词+for sb.+to do sth.）
3．在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，有美好的西方童话，从愚公移山到白雪公主，从美猴王到灰姑娘，从后羿射日到皇帝的新装……。人们每每诵读讲述都会倍感鼓舞，深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，你想和大家分享谁的故事呢？现在就动动小手写下来吧！
要求：1.可以从以上提示中选取故事，也可以选自己喜欢的其他故事。
2.内容包括：故事及故事给我们的启迪。
3.不能出现真实的学校名称、人名及其他真实信息。
4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of… with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s the story of … Hope you enjoy it!
【答案】参考例文：
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of Yu Gong with you.
Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. They were so big that it took a long time to walk to the other side. To solve this problem, Yu Gong told his family that he wanted to move the mountains and he needed their help. All his family members agreed so they started digging the next day. They worked day after day, night after night. One day, when a man saw Yu Gong and his family working, he said it was impossible for Yu Gong to move the mountains because he was old and weak. But Yu Gong said his family could continue doing it after he died. Yu Gong’s spirit moved the God so he sent two gods to take the mountains away. Seeing this, all the family members jumped with joy.
This story tells us we never know what is possible unless we try to make it happen. Besides, if we have a big dream, we should try our best to make it come true. That’s the story of Yu Gong. Hope you enjoy it!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求和大家分享故事；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态主要以一般过去时为主；可采用三段落格式，第一段：引出主题；第二段：详细阐述故事内容；第三段：阐述故事给我们的启迪。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
4．在我们国家，野生动物，尤其是濒危野生动物一直能得到很好的保护。2021年，我们国家千方百计保护云南亚洲象安全迁徙就是一个很好的例子。请根据以下内容，以“Saving Asian elephants”为题，写一篇介绍及保护亚洲象的英语短文。
Animal 亚洲象
Food 草，树叶，也吃香蕉和甘蔗(sugarcane)
Living places 较热的地方
Description 亚洲最大最壮的陆地动物之一性格友善；极度濒危，数量稀少
Ways to protect Asian elephants 保护森林；不购买象牙(ivory)制品；……(请你自己补充一点)
要求：
1.80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Saving Asian elephants
How much do you know about Asian elephants Let’s learn more about them.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Saving Asian elephants
How much do you know about Asian elephants Let’s learn more about them.
The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia. They mainly eat grass and leaves. At the same time, they also eat bananas and sugarcane. They enjoy living in hotter places. They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers.
In order to protect wild animals, we should cut down the forest reasonably and return the home to the wild animals. What’s more, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abusing. We mustn’t buy ivory products.
In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏已给出的关键信息，写短文介绍亚洲象及如何保护亚洲象。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章主题，介绍亚洲象；
第二步，介绍亚洲象的食物、居住环境、现状等；
第三步，介绍保护亚洲象的方法；
第四步，收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time 与此同时
②in order to do sth. 为了做某事
③cut down 砍倒
④wild animals 野生动物
⑤in a word 总而言之
[高分句型]
①The Asian elephant is one of the largest and strongest land animals in Asia.（“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”结构的运用）
②They have a friendly personality, but with the hunting and killing of people, they are now extremely endangered and in rare numbers.（but连接表转折关系的并列句）
③In a word, if we can share the Earth with the animals, we will have a better world and a brighter future.（if引导条件状语从句）
5．你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国文化很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给 Peter 写一封电子邮件介绍中国的糖画，并谈谈你对它的看法。
要点 ：
1. 糖画是中国的传统技艺之一， 始于明代，拥有大约五百年的历史；
2. 以糖为原材料、用简单的工具制作而成；
3. 通常被制成飞禽、走兽和文字等图案，然后粘在竹签上；
4. 既可食用， 又是一种艺术品，深受大人和小孩的喜爱。
5. 你的看法 。
参考词汇 ：糖面 sugar painting 明代 the Ming Dynasty 走兽 beast
要求 ：文章须包含所有要点，语句通顺， 意思连贯 ：80 词左右。
文章开头结尾已给出，不算在字数内 。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’m writing to tell you something about sugar painting.
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I hope you will have the chance to come to China and enjoy sugar painting.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’m writing to tell you something about sugar painting.
Sugar painting is one of the traditionalChinese techniques, which began in the Ming Dynasty. It is madefrom sugar and is usually made into patterns such as birds, animals and writing. Then it is glued to bamboo sticks. Sugar painting is edible. It is a work of art which is loved by both adults and children. I think sugar painting is not only a traditional food, but also a symbol of traditional Chinese culture.
I hope you will have the chance to come to China and enjoy sugar painting.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中中国糖画的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“简单介绍中国的糖画”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“历史、材料和工具、样式、作用等”几个方面重点介绍中国的糖画的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语表达“希望Peter来中国欣赏糖画”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②one of……其中之一
③be made into被制成
[高分句型]
①Sugar painting is one of the traditionalChinese techniques, which began inthe Ming Dynasty.（which引导的定语从句）
②I’m very glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture.（that引导的宾语从句）
6．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jerry刚来深圳一个月，还有些不习惯。请你给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一下深圳这个城市，帮助他早日融入深圳的当地生活。
要点：
1.深圳是一座义工之城，建议他多参加一些有意义的义工活动。
2.他在深圳可以体会到丰富的中国传统文化，丰富自己的业余生活。
3.任选一点自己再补充（公园之城，运动之都，海滨城市……）。
要求：
1.必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通畅；
4.不少于80词，开头结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Jerry,
I heard that you’ve been in Shenzhen for only one month. Maybe you don’t get used to your life in a new city.
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I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jerry,
I heard that you’ve been in Shenzhen for only one month. Maybe you don’t get used to your life in a new city. Let me introduce the city of Shenzhen to help you integrate into the local life in Shenzhen as soon as possible.
First of all, Shenzhen is a city of volunteers. You can take part in many meaningful volunteer activities. This will help you a lot. Secondly, you can experience the rich traditional Chinese culture and enrich your spare time life in Shenzhen. Finally, Shenzhen is also a city of parks. There are many parks where you can walk and exercise. I hope my introduction can help you know more about Shenzhen.
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议他多参加一些有意义的义工活动。
第二步，介绍他可以在深圳体验中国文化丰富自己；
第三步，最后介绍深圳也是公园之城，以及可以在里面做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② first of all首先
③ take part in参加
[高分句型]
① There are many parks where you can walk and exercise.（where引导的定语从句）
7．践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题， 写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：
1. What kind of bad manners have you seen
2. What’s your opinion about it
3. How can you be a student with good manners
注意：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
2.词数在80-100之间，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
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【答案】One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It’s very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.
In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.
【详解】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，阐述文明礼仪的好处；
第二步：阐述自己的观点；
第三步：阐述如何做一名文明礼仪的倡导者。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②refuse to do拒绝做某事
③none of my business与……无关
[高分句型]
①While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked.（时间状语从句）
②what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did.（主语从句）
③Only in this way can we be improved to be persons with good manners.（倒装句）
8．在上周的实践活动课上，你们班同学对网上购物这一现象进行了调查。你们在某小区抽取了100名年龄在15岁到65岁之间的受访者。下图是此次活动的统计结果。其中，20%的受访者从未有过网上购物的经历，26%的受访者表示经常在网上购物。
请你用两段话写一篇英语短文：第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容；第二段介绍你自己的购物习惯，并说明理由。
要求：1. 根据信息提示，把握要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名；
3. 词数不少于70。文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results. We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all. 35% sometimes shop online, 26% do it often, and 19% always buy things online.
As for me, I often shop online. First, it makes my life much easier and more comfortable. For example, I can get nearly everything from the Internet, such as books, clothes, food and so on. Second, things on the Internet are usually cheaper than those in stores. What’s more, shopping online can save me much time. I don’t need to go to the stores. In a word, I really enjoy this way of shopping.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图表信息，介绍对网上购物现象的调查和自己的购物习惯及理由，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍图表内容；
第二步，具体介绍自己的购物习惯及喜欢网购的理由。
[亮点词汇]
① not at all一点也不
② as for me对我来说
③ for example例如
④ such as例如
⑤ what’s more除此之外
⑥ in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all.（that引导的宾语从句）
9．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运
节日 春节等
形式 剪纸、灯笼、红包等
要求：
（1）回信须包含所有提示信息；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等；
（3）70词左右（开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：代表stand for；剪纸paper-cuts；灯笼lanterns；红包red packets
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red is very popular with Chinese people. It usually stands for happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. During the festival, Chinese people have many activities. We wear new red clothes, and the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and so on. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍“中国红”的地位及代表的意义；
第二步，介绍“中国红”在春节中的体现、形式等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①write to sb写信给某人
②be popular with受……欢迎
③stand for代表
④be filled with充满
[高分句型]
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.（宾语从句）
10．假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。
When and where did you buy the mobile phone
What’s wrong with the mobile phone
How would you like to solve the problem
注意事项：
1．信件必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。
2．词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
提示词汇： 质量 quality 电池 battery
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
Order number 8043197725
Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.
Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.
First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I can’t see what is on the screen.
I’m not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏三个问题提示中涉及的内容，写信反映自己遇到的问题并希望得到解决。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的；
第二步，介绍具体有什么不满的；
第二步，期望得到回复。
[亮点词汇]
①complain about 抱怨
②first of all 首先
③at most 至多
④be satisfied with 对……很满意
⑤regret doing sth. 后悔做了某事
[高分句型]
①I think it should last at least a whole day.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Also, there is something wrong with its screen. （There be句型）
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