专题05 主题写作10篇（满分范文）（学生版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、英文写作
1．读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示， 以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提示：
1）读书的重要性；
2）所读书目对自己的影响及感悟；
3）对读书的建议。
注意：
1）短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
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2．Write at least 55 words about the topic“The trouble I met with". The questions below arefor your reference only （以“我碰到的麻烦”为题写话，不少于55字。下列提示仅作参考）.
Suggested questions:
* What was the trouble you met with
* What happened later
* How did you feel from the trouble
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3．学校网站策划开办一档向世界介绍当代中学生的健康节目，现公开招聘线上小记者。假设你是Li Hua，请给网站负责人写一封邮件，内容包括以下部分，可以作适当拓展。字数在100字左右。不能出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear director,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a reporter for our school website.
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I hope I can have a chance to get the job.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
4．目前街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此“中学生英语报”组织了一次有关”城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的讨论。请你根据以下表格信息，介绍讨论的观点并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持 反对
宠物可爱，可以一起玩耍 不卫生，污染环境（environment）
带宠物散步， 锻炼身体 吵闹，甚至伤人
你的观点和理由……
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Is it a good idea for people to keep pets at home in cities ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．班上来了一名新同学，他叫Peter。你和他很快成为了好朋友，经过一段时间相处，你发现你和Peter之间有很多异同点。请以“My best friend and I”为题，根据以下信息点运用比较级写一篇文章。
Appearance Character Study Hobby
Peter tall, big eyes, brown hair… outgoing, friendly … be good at English, hardworking… play soccer every day, swim once a week； …
I … … … …
参考词汇：
珍惜友谊 value friendship
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
My best friend and I
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6．每个人在生活中养成了不同的习惯，有的是好习惯，有的是坏习惯，好习惯能帮助你健康成长，受益终身。请以How to grow up well为题写一篇英语短文，描述你拥有什么样的好习惯助力你健康成长的。
写作要点：1. 从eating habits、exercising habits和studying habits三方面介绍自己的习惯。
2. 参考用always、usually、sometimes、hardly ever、never描述自己的自律。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名；
2. 词数80左右。
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7．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “Numbers in our daily life”. （以“日常生活中的数字”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于55个）：
Suggested outlines:
* Do you think numbers are important in our daily life
* When do we use numbers in our daily life
* What will our life be like without numbers
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8．班会课上大家介绍自己的朋友。假如你最近交了一位外国朋友Lucy，请根据下面的提示向你的同学介绍她的情况。
生活方式 每星期锻炼三次；不吃垃圾食品
爱好与特长 爱看游戏节目（有教育意义）；唱歌好，有音乐天赋
与你比较 共同点：擅长网球
差异：她更用功
你喜欢她的原因 她关心你，帮助你……
注意：
1. 词数不少于80词。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的信息，语言准确得当，条理清楚，可适当发挥。
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9．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic‘‘My Daily Life’’（以“我的日常生活”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于55字）：
Suggested outlines:
* What do you think of your daily life
* What do you do in your daily life
My Daily Life
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10．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “I want to have a/an school life”（“我想要有一个……校园生活”为题写一篇短文， 词数不少于55个字）:
Suggested outlines:
1. What do you think of your school life now
2. What kind of school life do you want to have
3. What activities do you want to have in your school
I want to have a/an school life
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专题05 主题写作10篇（满分范文）（详解版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、英文写作
1．读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示， 以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你曾经读过的一本书，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提示：
1）读书的重要性；
2）所读书目对自己的影响及感悟；
3）对读书的建议。
注意：
1）短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
Growing up with Reading __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident.
My favourite book is Robinson Crusoe. I am always deeply interested in it when I read about the hero Robinson who escapes from the broken ship to an uninhabited island. He never gives up his hope to live on this island. His wisdom and bravery help him beat any difficulty. Robinson Crusoe encourages me to fight against any trouble. So I suggest that everyone should read more books, especially classics so that we can build up our strong minds.
So I’d like to suggest that everyone should read more books during our spare time and develop a good reading habit. And we should read more classics to learn more culture of the world. It’s a good idea to build reading clubs. The student can read more books. Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求以“Growing up with Reading”为题，根据三个提示要点写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书，内容包括：读书的重要性，所读书目对你的影响和感悟以及你对读书的建议。
2.写作指导：要点提示一和提示三以观点陈述为主，其时态主要用一般现在时，要点提示二需根据实际情况选用时态；写作时应承接开头，紧扣提示内容进行发挥，还可以在提示内容的基础上再适当发挥以丰富文章内容和达成字数要求；题目要求“介绍你自经读过的一本书”，所以写作重点可放在要点提示二上；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文的表达习惯。
2．Write at least 55 words about the topic“The trouble I met with". The questions below arefor your reference only （以“我碰到的麻烦”为题写话，不少于55字。下列提示仅作参考）.
Suggested questions:
* What was the trouble you met with
* What happened later
* How did you feel from the trouble
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【答案】范文
Last weekend. I hurried to school without having breakfast. When I got to the classroom, I suddenly realized I didn't bring my glasses with me. You know, I will not see the blackboard clearly if I don't wear glasses. The first class would begin soon. I was worried at that time. Just then, my mobile phone rang. I was from my dear dad. He said, “I am at the school gate. You forgot your glasses and I've already brought it here for you. " I came out of the classroom quickly and hugged my dad. How well my dad treat me!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我碰到的麻烦”为题写话，不少于55字。下列提示仅作参考）. Suggested questions:* What was the trouble you met with * What happened later
* How did you feel from the trouble
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般过去时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：hurried to ；without having breakfast.；got to the classroom；at that time；at the school gate；came out of等。
句型：1. Last weekend. I hurried to school without having breakfast.2. When I got to the classroom, I suddenly realized I didn't bring my glasses with me.3. You know, I will not see the blackboard clearly if I don't wear glasses.4. I came out of the classroom quickly and hugged my dad.
【点睛】首先要认真阅读根据信息的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．学校网站策划开办一档向世界介绍当代中学生的健康节目，现公开招聘线上小记者。假设你是Li Hua，请给网站负责人写一封邮件，内容包括以下部分，可以作适当拓展。字数在100字左右。不能出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Dear director,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a reporter for our school website.
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I hope I can have a chance to get the job.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear director,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a reporter for our school website.
I’m very friendly and helpful. I often help classmates with their study and help children in poor areas. I’m also out-going and good at communicating with others. What’s more, I am the class monitor so that I know how to work with others. What I am proud of is my English. I’ve won many prizes in English-speaking and English-writing competitions. I like cooking best. At weekends, I always try making different kinds of delicious dishes that are healthy for our body and share them with my friends.
I pay much attention to healthy eating habits and do sports on a regular basis, so that my health is in a good condition. Besides, in my spare time, I do a lot of reading on healthy living styles. Last but not least, I have gained a lot of working experience as a reporter since I joined in the school journalist club, which will be of great help in my future job.
I hope I can have a chance to get the job.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封自荐信，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，表明想应聘学校网站记者一职；
第二步，按照思维导图提示分别从性格、技能和爱好、健康状况及工作经验等方面进行自我介绍，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达希望自己能被录取的愿望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at communicating with others擅长与他人进行交流
②pay much attention to healthy eating habits关注健康的饮食习惯
③do sports on a regular basis定期进行锻炼
④be of great help有很大的帮助
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I am the class monitor so that I know how to work with others.（so that引导结果状语从句）
②What I am proud of is my English.（what引导主语从句）
③At weekends, I always try making different kinds of delicious dishes that are healthy for our body and share them with my friends.（that引导定语从句）
④Last but not least, I have gained a lot of working experience as a reporter since I joined in the school journalist club, which will be of great help in my future job.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
4．目前街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗，对此“中学生英语报”组织了一次有关”城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的讨论。请你根据以下表格信息，介绍讨论的观点并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持 反对
宠物可爱，可以一起玩耍 不卫生，污染环境（environment）
带宠物散步， 锻炼身体 吵闹，甚至伤人
你的观点和理由……
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Is it a good idea for people to keep pets at home in cities ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Is it a good idea for people to keep pets at home in cites Recently we have had a discussion.
Some students think it’s a good idea to keep pets because the pets are so lovely that you can play with them. Besides, when they walk their pets, they are doing exercise, too. However, the other students are against the idea. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it is dirty and it is bad for the environment. What’s more, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
For me, I like animals, so I think it is good to keep pets at home. Keeping pets is good for old people who live alone at home. But we must get some ways to prevent them from polluting our environment.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”为主题展开讨论，写一篇短文。写作的观点根据表格中已给的正反观点进行论述，自己的观点需要自行发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段提出问题“该不该在城市养宠物”，引出话题。第二段分别从正反两方面给出观点阐述。第三段阐述自己的观点和理由。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，力求语句通顺，逻辑清晰。
5．班上来了一名新同学，他叫Peter。你和他很快成为了好朋友，经过一段时间相处，你发现你和Peter之间有很多异同点。请以“My best friend and I”为题，根据以下信息点运用比较级写一篇文章。
Appearance Character Study Hobby
Peter tall, big eyes, brown hair… outgoing, friendly … be good at English, hardworking… play soccer every day, swim once a week； …
I … … … …
参考词汇：
珍惜友谊 value friendship
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
My best friend and I
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【答案】例文
My best friend and I
I have a new friend and his name is Peter. We have similarities and differences.
He is a tall boy who comes from England. He has two big eyes and short brown hair. But I am short and thin. He’s more outgoing than me. He is as friendly as me. He is good at English, while I am good at maths. We are both hardworking. We often help each other. His favorite sport is football. He plays football every day. He also likes swimming. He swims once a week. I like reading because I think it’s interesting.
Although we have some differences, we are good friends. Our friendship will last forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意使用比较级写句子，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你和Peter的外貌和性格；
第二步，介绍你们的学习情况；
第三步，最后描述你们的爱好。
[亮点词汇]
① as...as和……一样……
② be good at擅长
③ help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
① I like reading because I think it’s interesting.（原因状语从句）
② Although we have some differences, we are good friends（让步状语从句）
6．每个人在生活中养成了不同的习惯，有的是好习惯，有的是坏习惯，好习惯能帮助你健康成长，受益终身。请以How to grow up well为题写一篇英语短文，描述你拥有什么样的好习惯助力你健康成长的。
写作要点：1. 从eating habits、exercising habits和studying habits三方面介绍自己的习惯。
2. 参考用always、usually、sometimes、hardly ever、never描述自己的自律。
写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名；
2. 词数80左右。
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【答案】例文
How to grow up well
Everyone has both good habits and bad ones. Good habits can help you grow up healthily. Now let me share my habits with you.
I have a good eating habit. I always eat fruit and vegetables which are good for my health. I never eat junk food like hamburgers and fried chips. As for exercising habits, I usually get up early in the morning and run for an hour in the park. For studying, I always make a study plan. I can balance my hobbies and my study.
In a word, I think these good habits help me to grow up well and make my life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出本文主题；
第二步，从饮食习惯，锻炼习惯和学习习惯这三个方面介绍；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up成长
②be good for对……有好处
③junk food垃圾食品
[高分句型]
①Now let me share my habits with you.（祈使句）
②In a word, I think these good habits help me to grow up well and make my life better.（宾语从句）
7．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “Numbers in our daily life”. （以“日常生活中的数字”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于55个）：
Suggested outlines:
* Do you think numbers are important in our daily life
* When do we use numbers in our daily life
* What will our life be like without numbers
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【答案】范文
Numbers in our daily life
Numbers are very important in our daily life. Maths teachers use numbers to teach us how to do calculation and solve problems. We read numbers from newspapers to know the information and facts. When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices. Without numbers, it will be difficult for us to even tell the time. That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。本文以“日常生活中的数字”为题展开描述，文中介绍日常生活中什么时候会用到数词，以及如果没有数字，我们的生活会是什么样子的。
2.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，语句表达通顺。
3.高分亮点：
短语：use sth to do sth 用……做某事；be difficult for sb对某人来说很困难。
句子：When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices句中when引导的时间状语从句；That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it句中so…that引导的结果状语从句。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如use sth to do sth，be difficult for sb等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
8．班会课上大家介绍自己的朋友。假如你最近交了一位外国朋友Lucy，请根据下面的提示向你的同学介绍她的情况。
生活方式 每星期锻炼三次；不吃垃圾食品
爱好与特长 爱看游戏节目（有教育意义）；唱歌好，有音乐天赋
与你比较 共同点：擅长网球
差异：她更用功
你喜欢她的原因 她关心你，帮助你……
注意：
1. 词数不少于80词。
2. 内容必须包括表格中的信息，语言准确得当，条理清楚，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
I just made a foreign friend called Lucy, and I want to tell you about her.
Lucy has a good lifestyle. She exercises three times a week, and she never eats junk food because she thinks that it’s bad for her. She has many hobbies, such as doing sports and watching educational game shows. She can sing very well, and I think she has a musical talent. We are both good at playing tennis, but Lucy works harder than me. I like her because she always cares about me, and she often helps me with my schoolwork.
Do you have any good friends What are they like
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的朋友露西的情况，我和露西的相同点和不同点，喜欢她的原因”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我刚交了一个叫露西的外国朋友，我想告诉你她的情况。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“露西的个人情况，我们之间相同处与不同处，我喜欢她的原因”重点介绍我的朋友露西的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“他们是什么样的？”
[亮点词汇]
① want to do sth想要做某事
② be good at擅长
[高分句型]
① She exercises three times a week, and she never eats junk food because she thinks that it’s bad for her.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② She can sing very well, and I think she has a musical talent.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic‘‘My Daily Life’’（以“我的日常生活”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于55字）：
Suggested outlines:
* What do you think of your daily life
* What do you do in your daily life
My Daily Life
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【答案】范文
My daily life
I get up at six every day. I dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past six. After breakfast I go to school and have four lessons in the morning and three in the afternoon. I study hard and always help my classmate with their lessons. I have lunch at school. School is over at five. After supper I read newspapers or watch TV for half an hour. I prepare my lessons between half past seven and nine. I go to bed at nine. The above is a brief account of my daily life on weekdays. There is no school on Sundays. I usually review my lessons in the morning and call on some friends or go to see a film in the afternoon.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍自己的日常生活，属于记叙文写作。作者从起床写起I get up at six every day，然后介绍一天的基本生活（三餐、上课、活动、休息等），最后简单介绍周末生活。
2.例文点评：本文用第一人称讲述了自己的日常生活，时态是一般现在时；内容充实，描述细致，表达流畅，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：dress myself, have breakfast, get up, go to school, in the morning/afternoon, watch TV, both…and, go to bed, on weekdays.
高分句型：
1). I dress myself quickly and have breakfast at half past six.（并列结构）
2). There is no school on Sundays.（there be结构）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
10．Write a passage of at least 55 words on the topic “I want to have a/an school life”（“我想要有一个……校园生活”为题写一篇短文， 词数不少于55个字）:
Suggested outlines:
1. What do you think of your school life now
2. What kind of school life do you want to have
3. What activities do you want to have in your school
I want to have a/an school life
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【答案】范文
I want to have a colourful school life
My present school life is quite boring. Every day we just have to sit in the classroom, listening to the teachers and doing school work. I am dreaming of a colorful school life, busy but pleasant. Besides attending regular classes, I hope to join different clubs after school. like football or basketball clubs. I also hope that there will be an art festival every term in our school, so that we can have the chance to show the talents we have for music. It will also be amazing if there are different competitions organized every month to simulate our enthusiasm for learning.' Of course, these activities will very much improve our al-round development.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章主要描写想要拥有的学校生活是什么样的，可以写现在的学校生活，期待的将来的学校生活又是什么样的，期待的校园活动等描写，尤其是描述想要什么样的学校生活要具体详细。
2. 例文点评：文章主要描写想要的学校生活，更多的使用一般将来时描述。通过现在的情况与将来的进行对比，突出将来学校生活的好。整个文章结构完整，意思表达明确清晰，语言应用较好。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：listen to；hope to do；after school。
句型：I hope+宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
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