2024新课标英语高考专题复习
题型五 短文改错
五年高考
Proofreading 1(2023全国乙)
Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth:the color wouldn't wash out.
答案
1. 第一句:his→her 2. 第二句:删除with 3. 第三句:choose→chose 4. 第三句:that→whose 5. 第四句:在same前加the 6. 第五句:or→and 7. 第五句:saying→said 8. 第六句:final→finally 9. 第七句:washing→wash 10. 第八句:truth→true
Proofreading 2(2023全国甲)
I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday's biology class make a big change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I've come to love those of small living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more meaningful to me.
答案
1. 第一句:afraid 前加be 2. 第一句:make→made 3. 第二句:we→us 4. 第三句:butterfly→butterflies 5. 第三句:beautifully→beautiful 6. 第四句:or→and 7. 第五句:what→which 8. 第六句:删去those后的of 9. 第七句:第二个the→a 10. 第七句:become→becomes
Proofreading 3(2022全国乙)
We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don't use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
答案
1. 第一句:greatly改为great 2. 第二句:lives改为live 3. 第三句:because后加of 4. 第四句:Whether改为If或When 5. 第五句:they改为you 6. 第五句:cause改为causing 7. 第六句:删掉been 8. 第七句:what改为which 9. 第八句:were改为are 10. 第九句:bicycle改为bicycles
Proofreading 4(2022全国甲)
My father often took me to his hospital when I was off my school. He showed me how his medical instruments was used. I felt so closely to him. However, after I went to high school, somehow I become distant from him. I was unwilling talk with him and often disobeyed his rule of not stay out with my friends too late. The disagreement was too sharp that neither he nor I knew what to settle it. One day, he talked with me or hoped to mend our relations. With the efforts made by all sides, we began to understand each other better.
答案
1. 第一句:删掉school前的my 2. 第二句:was改为were 3. 第三句:closely改为close 4. 第四句:become改为became 5. 第五句:talk前加to 6. 第五句:stay改为staying 7. 第六句:too改为so 8. 第六句:what改为how 9. 第七句:or改为and 10. 第八句:all改为both
Proofreading 5(2021全国乙)
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That's our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
答案
1. 第二句:dish改为dishes 2. 第三句:tidying改为tidy 3. 第三句:whatever改为whenever 4. 第四句:lot后加from/by 5. 第五句:was改为is 6. 第六句:删除like前的are 7. 第七句:most改为more 8. 第七句:mentally改为mental 9. 第八句:our改为my 10. 第九句:hopes改为hope
Proofreading 6(2021全国甲)
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
答案
1. 第二句:are改为is 2. 第二句:go后加to 3. 第四句:friend改为friends 4. 第五句:删除turn后的out 5. 第六句:little改为few 6. 第六句:our改为their 7. 第七句:talk改为talking 8. 第八句:kept改为keep 9. 第九句:where改为when 10. 第九句:mostly改为most
Proofreading 7(2020全国Ⅰ)
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.
答案
1. 第一句:simply改为simple 2. 第二句:frying改为fried 3. 第二句:删除must后的to 4. 第三句:preparing改为prepare 5. 第四句:but改为and 6. 第五句:chopstick改为chopsticks 7. 第六句:off改为on 8. 第七句:unless改为until/till 9. 第八句:pan前加the 10. 第九句:us改为me
Proofreading 8(2020全国Ⅱ)
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm surely you'll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
答案
1. 第一句:what改为which 2. 第二句:come后加to 3. 第三句:surely改为sure 4. 第四句:start改为started 5. 第四句:for改为but/yet 6. 第五句:vacations改为vacation 7. 第六句:such改为so 8. 第六句:删除every day前的on 9. 第七句:yours改为your/you 10. 第八句:sooner改为soon
Proofreading 9(2020全国Ⅲ)
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
答案
1. 第一句:concerning改为concerned 2. 第一句:families改为family 3. 第二句:surely改为sure 4. 第二句:删除and 5. 第三句:the改为a 6. 第三句:had改为have 7. 第四句:like前的don't改为doesn't 8. 第五句:forced后加to 9. 第六句:he改为she 10. 第七句:what改为that
Proofreading 10(2019课标全国Ⅰ)
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone's surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
答案
1. 第一句:interesting改为interested 2. 第二句:where改为when 3. 第三句:football前加a 4. 第三句:but改为and 5. 第四句:hardly改为hard 6. 第五句:surprising改为surprise 7. 第六句:player改为players 8. 第六句:say改为saying 9. 第七句:now 改为then 10. 第七句:删除football前的my
Proofreading 11(2019课标全国Ⅱ)
Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
答案
1. 第一句:job改为jobs 2. 第二句:coolly改为cool 3. 第三句:five改为fifth 4. 第三句:too改为very/so 5. 第四句:high school前加in/at 6. 第四句:or改为and 7. 第五句:They改为There 8. 第六句:amazing改为amazed 9. 第六句:删除better前的more 10. 第七句:is改为was
Proofreading 12(2019课标全国Ⅲ)
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
答案
1. 第二句:opens改为open 2. 第三句:required改为requires 3. 第四句:ordinarily改为ordinary 4. 第五句:have前加to 5. 第五句:删除like 6. 第六句:yourselves改为themselves 7. 第六句:what改为which/that 8. 第七句:manage改为managing 9. 第八句:city改为cities 10. 第九句:an改为a
三年模拟
A组 考点基础题组
Proofreading 1(2023开封二模)
It's normal to feel angry from time to time in respond to certain situations. However, we can't allow ourselves to be consumed with anger. There are several helpful way to control your anger. Firstly, stop talk. If you let angry words fly, you are more likely do more harm than good. So pretend your lips are gluing together. This moment with speaking will give you time to collect your thoughts. Secondly, write down what you are feeling and that how you want to respond, which helps you reassess the event. If the first two steps doesn't work, go for the walk. Exercise is usefully for improving fitness and reducing anger.
答案
1. 第一句:respond改为response 2. 第三句:way改为ways 3. 第四句:talk改为talking 4. 第五句:likely后加to 5. 第六句:gluing改为glued 6. 第七句:with改为without 7. 第八句:删除that 8. 第九句:doesn't改为don't 9. 第九句:第二个the改为a 10. 第十句:usefully改为useful
Proofreading 2(2023成都二诊)
The meaning of life differ from person to person, but we have different life purposes in each stage of life. For each goal, the important thing is to give you encouragement to get up in the morning and fight against what we want. We had seen people who handle many tough situation with motivation. Although we share same biological structures, which sets us apart from these people is determination. Being determined to achieve something and overcame all difficulties will help us find our purposes in each stage of life. Actually, if we can not find a purpose, we'll not only bear our suffering, but also see it as a blessing.
答案
1. 第一句:differ改为differs 2. 第一句:but改为and 3. 第二句:you改为us 4. 第二句:against改为for 5. 第三句:had改为have 6. 第三句:situation改为situations 7. 第四句:same前加the 8. 第四句:which改为what 9. 第五句:overcame改为overcome 10. 第六句:删除not
Proofreading 3(2023广西柳州一模)
I enjoy listen to music. It helps me calm down after an busy day. I like many different types of music, such for rock and R&B. Last year I went to a pop festival with some friends. It lasted for three days. So we decided camp on a field. The weather was awful and it rain all day. We were totally wet! Although the weather was bad, but the concert continued and the music was great. I particular enjoyed some of the supporting band. I found them performing better than the main stars. It was probably because the concert was their great opportunity to have their music hear. And that was great for them to get cheered by music fans.
答案
1. 第一句:listen改为listening 2. 第二句:an改为a 3. 第三句:for改为as 4. 第六句:decided后加to 5. 第七句:rain改为rained 6. 第九句:删除but 7. 第十句:particular改为particularly 8. 第十句:band改为bands 9. 第十二句:hear改为heard 10. 第十三句:that改为it
Proofreading 4(2023南宁摸底)
In every experiment class, our teacher teaches us a interesting experiment. Today, the teacher shows us how to make a candle burn underwater. It was like magic, interesting and amazing. The teacher first explained the scientific principle behind the experiment and wanted us remember it. After take notes, under the guidance of our teacher, we carefully put the candle into the water or lit it. Finally, everyone successful completed the experiment. We were so exciting. No sooner had we finished the experiment that we surrounded our teacher cheerfully. As we all know it, having the scientific experiment class enable students to learn a lot of wonderful scientific knowledge.
答案
1. 第一句:a改为an 2. 第二句:shows改为showed 3. 第四句:remember前加to 4. 第五句:take改为taking 5. 第五句:or改为and 6. 第六句:successful改为successfully 7. 第七句:exciting改为excited 8. 第八句:that改为than 9. 第九句:删除it 10. 第九句:enable改为enables
Proofreading 5(2023河南八市重点高中摸底)
I know from your last letter that you have a strong desire to buy some specially gifts with typical Chinese features. I'm extremely delighted to offer you some constructive advices. Here are some details. Initially, a tea pot producing in Wuxi is an extraordinary alternative. What deserved to be mentioned is that China has a profound history concerning tea culture, which could date back thousands of years ago. Beside, not only can drinking tea promote our sense of satisfaction, but also can improve ours memory. Secondly, that calls for our special attention is the treasure of China, Panda. Thus, a toy is named Bing Dwen Dwen can be considered due to its lovely appearance. As the matter of fact, if you can take my suggestions into consideration, I'm sure your family will love what you choose for them.
答案
1. 第一句:specially改为special 2. 第二句:advices改为advice 3. 第四句:producing改为produced 4. 第五句:deserved改为deserves 5. 第五句:back后加to 6. 第六句:Beside改为Besides 7. 第六句:ours改为our 8. 第七句:that改为what 9. 第八句:删除is 10. 第九句:the改为a
Proofreading 6(2023安徽十校联考一测)
There is a extremely annoying phenomenon that many students litter in our school. Not only it bad for our health but it also makes our school more and less beautiful. Therefore, our school is going to hold an activity themed “Stop Littering in Our School”. The activity will surely leave an unforgettably impression on those who take part on it. In the activity, we will first to walk around the school to see however serious the littering problem is. After that, we will be divided into groups to pick up rubbishes. Through this activity, we are expected to realize the importance of protect the living environment in our school but stop littering in our school.
答案
1. 第一句:a改为an 2. 第二句:only后加is 3. 第二句:more改为less 4. 第四句:unforgettably改为unforgettable 5. 第四句:第二个on改为in 6. 第五句:删除第一个to 7. 第五句:however改为how 8. 第六句:rubbishes改为rubbish 9. 第七句:protect改为protecting 10. 第七句:but改为and
Proofreading 7(2022江西南昌一模)
One day in June, all of sudden, it rained heavily and the raindrops made a wonderful sound. We felt very hot in the classroom that we couldn't concentrate on schoolwork and instead of were eager to enjoy the cool rain. Sensed that, the teacher simple wrote “sitting and listening” on the blackboard with a smile. I am sitting next to the window, listening to the rain. It seemed to calm me down but reminded me of ancient Chinese poems, who brought me a sense of peace. We should appreciate the small thing in life, like sunsets and rainbows after storms. In this way, we can develop their inner world into an ideal state.
答案
1. 第一句:sudden前加a 2. 第二句:very改为so 3. 第二句:删除instead后的of 4. 第三句:Sensed改为Sensing 5. 第三句:simple改为simply 6. 第四句:am改为was 7. 第五句:but改为and 8. 第五句:who改为which 9. 第六句:thing改为things 10. 第七句:their改为our
Proofreading 8(2022合肥一测)
Mr. Zhang is one of my favorite high school teacher. He is a very patient teacher, who often explains us everything carefully to make him understood. He's also such kind and friendly that we always turn to him for help. Deal with students can be annoying sometimes, but he never complained. Besides, he always explores new ways to make his lessons attractively. Above all, Mr. Zhang is constantly encouraged us to get involved in classroom activities. He makes me to realize teaching is a very meaningful profession. That's because I'm determined to be a teacher like him in the future.
答案
1. 第一句:teacher改为teachers 2. 第二句:us前加to 3. 第二句:him改为himself 4. 第三句:such改为so 5. 第四句:Deal改为Dealing 6. 第四句:complained改为complains 7. 第五句:attractively改为attractive 8. 第六句:encouraged改为encouraging 9. 第七句:删除to 10. 第八句:because改为why
Proofreading 9(2021昆明三模)
I have had the pleasure of meeting a nice neighbor since my family move to the new community. We usual just waved and said “hi” when we met. Therefore, an incident changed this. The other day, a heavier rain hit our area. With strong winds blowing throughout the day, a part of his wooden fence, about 2 metre of it, came down. When I was wondering what to get it repaired, he gave me a hand. With his help, the fence was fixed quickly. It was kind act by my neighbor and I was touching by his kindness. I will soon send to him a thank-you note.
答案
1. 第一句:move改为moved 2. 第二句:usual改为usually 3. 第三句:Therefore改为However 4. 第四句:heavier改为heavy 5. 第五句:his改为my 6. 第五句:metre改为metres 7. 第六句:what改为how 8. 第八句:kind前加a 9. 第八句:touching改为touched 10. 第九句:删除send后的to
Proofreading 10(2021河南安阳二模)
The other day, I went home so lately that my mother couldn't afford to wait me any longer. So she began to have a lunch by herself. When I opened the door, my mother seemed to feel a little embarrassing. She hurried to heat the dishes what had already turned a little cold on the table. I stopped her and saying with a smile, “It was not necessary, Mom. I can eat them.” I clearly remembered that my mother had taught me not to cause any trouble to other at any time. In fact, I just didn't want to trouble him any more as she was already too tired from doing the houseworks.
答案
1. 第一句:lately改为late 2. 第一句:wait后加for 3. 第二句:删除lunch前的a 4. 第三句:embarrassing改为embarrassed 5. 第四句:what改为that/which 6. 第五句:saying改为said 7. 第五句:was改为is 8. 第六句:other改为others 9. 第七句:him改为her 10. 第七句:houseworks改为housework
B组 综合应用题组
Proofreading 1(2023广西柳州三模)
I am a member of the Calligraphy Club in our school. I really enjoy the time how the brush in my hand go smoothly on the paper. Use brushes to write Chinese characters requires much muscle strengths and control. It helps me to find inner peace and build up with self-discipline. In this fast-paced society, people forget slow down to appreciate the beauty of Chinese characters. However, our club often arranges calligraphy exhibitions on campus such that students can have a taste of this traditional art. I think it's your responsibility to preserve and promote traditional Chinese culture among youngest people.
答案
1. 第二句:how改为when 2. 第二句:go改为goes 3. 第三句:Use改为Using 4. 第三句:strengths改为strength 5. 第四句:删除with 6. 第五句:slow前加to 7. 第六句:However改为Therefore 8. 第六句:such改为so 9. 第七句:your改为our 10. 第七句:youngest改为young
Proofreading 2(2023沈阳二模)
High school is considered the most important stage in one's life. It won't be long when I graduate. Now I have many things to share my fellows. First of all, I'd like to express my thanks to those who lend me a hand when I was disappointing. It was their kindness which helped me regain my self-confidence when I lost my heart. Beside, I am terribly anxious to clear up some misunderstandings with my friends in order to keeping our friendships forever. The National College Entrance Examination approaching, I strongly recommend that we could value time and redouble efforts to study so that we can get into an university that we have been dreaming of.
答案
1. 第二句:when改为before 2. 第三句:share后加with 3. 第四句:lend改为lent 4. 第四句:disappointing改为disappointed 5. 第五句:which改为that 6. 第五句:删除第二个my 7. 第六句:Beside改为Besides 8. 第六句:keeping改为keep 9. 第七句:could改为should或删除could 10. 第七句:an改为a
Proofreading 3(2023河南安阳一模)
Heard that you have been addicted to Douyin recently, I feel terrible sorry and can't wait to write this email in reply to your problem. Actually, this is commonly seen that the growing number of teenagers get crazy about Douyin. They spend plenty of time watching and sharing videos online, what makes it hard for them to focus on study. As a result, action must taken before things get worse. In my opinion, you'd better try and develop a few other hobby. Besides, communicating with friends face to face will do the trick. That's why this can help you shift your attention and formed good habits. I do hope my suggestions will be of greatly helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
答案
1. 第一句:Heard改为Hearing 2. 第一句:terrible改为terribly 3. 第二句:this改为it 4. 第二句:the改为a 5. 第三句:what改为which 6. 第四句:must后加be 7. 第五句:hobby改为hobbies 8. 第七句:why改为because 9. 第七句:formed改为form 10. 第八句:去掉be后的of
Proofreading 4(2023广西桂林、崇左联合一调)
I'm happy to hear of you. You had asked me in your last email about the student clubs in my school and the following information may give you an general idea. Consisting of more than five thousands students, my school provides various clubs meet all tastes. Students can choose a club to join or set up a new one with the help of your teachers. The speech, photography, painting, and basketball clubs enjoys the greatest popularity. As for me, I'm a regularly member of the volleyball club, that I've learned the value of teamwork and a healthy way to face challenges in my life. I hope the information providing is helpful.
答案
1. 第一句:of改为from 2. 第二句:删除asked前的had 3. 第二句:an改为a 4. 第三句:thousands改为thousand 5. 第三句:meet前加to 6. 第四句:your改为their 7. 第五句:enjoys改为enjoy 8. 第六句:regularly改为regular 9. 第六句:that改为where 10. 第七句:providing改为provided
Proofreading 5(2023陕西宝鸡一测)
When I was in primary school, I often went to the wetland of my hometown, there I could see many different kinds of animals, including wild birds, fish, snakes, insects and so on. That was an interesting place for my friends and I to watch the birds and study them. And things have begin to change in recent years. Small birds are being caught up with nets. Wild ducks are being sold at food markets. And even bad, the wetland is being destroyed. Some parts are being covered with new house. You can see rubbish everywhere. The wetland is being polluted serious every day. I am very worried it. How can we do 答案
1. 第一句:there改为where 2. 第二句:I改为me 3. 第三句:And改为But 4. 第三句:begin改为begun 5. 第四句:删除caught后的up 6. 第六句:bad改为worse 7. 第七句:house改为houses 8. 第九句:serious改为seriously 9. 第十句:worried后加about 10. 第十一句:How改为What
Proofreading 6(2023江西九江一模)
Recently our class have had a debate. Its topic focuses on if it is necessary to use high technology to beautify the Palace Museum. As for this, different students hold different opinion. Some are in favor of the creative idea because of the use of high technology can add beauty to the Palace Museum, thus make it more attractive to visitors. Therefore, those who are against the idea thinks that this technology will destroy the original appearance of the Palace Museum. More important, it is extremely essential to respect the history and tradition. From me point of view, other measures can be taken attract more visitors. And it's our duty to provide the complete and genuine ancient palace for the world.
答案
1. 第二句:if改为whether 2. 第三句:opinion改为opinions 3. 第四句:删除第二个of 4. 第四句:make改为making 5. 第五句:Therefore改为However 6. 第五句:thinks改为think 7. 第六句:important改为importantly 8. 第七句:me改为my 9. 第七句:attract前加to 10. 第八句:the改为a
Proofreading 7(2022昆明“三诊一模”统测)
Millions of students across China watched the live broadcast of the lecture giving by Shenzhou-13 crew members in last month. During the roughly one-hour class, students learned about the working environment of the space station. Amazing, they observed experiments related to human body movement as well cell growth in the weightless environment. They were so excited to attend such the wonderful live class in which they learned much about space than before. After they hear about the negative effects of the space environment on the human body, they expressed their admiration for the astronaut. They are really great people. They have devoted himself to the space exploration though facing high risks. There is no doubt whether their devotion deserves our respect.
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1. 第一句:giving改为given 2. 第一句:删除in 3. 第三句:Amazing改为Amazingly 4. 第三句:well后加as 5. 第四句:the改为a 6. 第四句:much改为more 7. 第五句:hear改为heard 8. 第五句:astronaut改为astronauts 9. 第七句:himself改为themselves 10. 第八句:whether改为that
Proofreading 8(2022甘肃一诊)
I am a 18-year-old middle school student. I seldom helped my parents for the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think what to do to help. Last Sunday, parents went out shopping. I suddenly got an idea:why not to give the rooms a thoroughly cleaning Firstly I collected all the books and other things and put it in place. Then I wiped the dusty off all the furniture. Before that, I sweep and mopped the floors. At that very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tiring as I was, I felt very happy then.
答案
1. 第一句:a改为an 2. 第二句:for改为with 3. 第四句:parents前加my 4. 第五句:删除to 5. 第五句:thoroughly改为thorough 6. 第六句:it改为them 7. 第七句:dusty改为dust 8. 第八句:Before改为After 9. 第八句:sweep改为swept 10. 第十一句:Tiring改为Tired
Proofreading 9(2021太原三模)
My aunt is a well-known artist. Her paintings are such lifelike that they always give me much pleasures. My aunt always reminds me of that there is more than one way of interpreting a painting. In my opinion,art is supposed to shared. It is a form of communication. I couldn't agree with her much. When viewers look at a work of art, they were bringing with them all their life experiences as well as previous memories. That one experiences will not be exactly the same as someone else's when face with the same piece. Perhaps that's where its truly beauty lies.
答案
1. 第二句:such改为so 2. 第二句:pleasures改为pleasure 3. 第三句:删除that前的of 4. 第四句:my改为her 5. 第四句:shared前加be 6. 第六句:much 改为more 7. 第七句:were改为are 8. 第八句:That改为What 9. 第八句:face改为faced 10. 第九句:truly改为true
Proofreading 10(2021成都联考一诊)
Patsy Smith has raised ducks for many years. One of her ducks, Peg, losing one of his legs in a fight with a tortoise. Mrs. Smith called for help to see whether anyone could create new leg for him. Three students thought it possibly to use their 3D printer to print a leg for the poor duck. They spent several months creating and testing different model. It turns out to be a lot more difficult than they had thought! Luckily, their hard work was paid off and they created a model who fitted Peg's leg perfectly. Now, Peg can walk or even run just like her duck partners! Moreover, Mrs. Smith is very thankful for them.
答案
1. 第二句:losing改为lost 2. 第三句:new前加a 3. 第四句:possibly改为possible 4. 第五句:model改为models 5. 第六句:turns改为turned 6. 第七句:删除paid前的was 7. 第七句:who改为which/that 8. 第八句:or改为and 9. 第八句:her改为his 10. 第九句:for改为to
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