备考2023年高考英语二轮专题:书面表达(图表作文)
一、书面表达
1.(2020·江都模拟)阅读下面短文,结合图表内容,按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。
Every year, many college students graduate and they feel distressed and confused because they do not know whether they should choose to continue their postgraduate studies or get employed In fact, either option has its own advantages and disadvantages.
If you are passionate about learning and can devote yourself to it, then choose to apply for a postgraduate course. Of course, you can also enter into society to sharpen your skills and enrich your experience after graduation from college or university.
[写作内容]
1)用约30个词概括上述图文内容;
2)结合上述信息,简要分析大学生毕业后考研和就业人数变化的原因;
3)请联系自身谈谈你将来大学毕业后的选择(就业还是读研)并说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
2.(2020·江苏模拟)下面是某中学的中学生睡眠情况的调查结果,请根据要求,用英文写一篇调查报告。
【写作内容】
1)概述左边饼图所示信息的主要内容;
2)结合右边饼图谈谈"影响睡眠的因素"并提出改进措施(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1)词数150词左右;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
3.(2020·浦东新模拟)Directions: Write an English composition
in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
经过一段时间的网上学习之后,明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查,调查结果如图所示。
A. 直播课并且有师生互动 B. 录播课并且之后有师生互动时间
C. 直播课但无师生互动 D. 录播课且之后也无师生互动时间
你可能会用到的词汇:
直播课:live streaming lesson 录播课: prerecorded lesson
请你根据该图标写篇作文,你的文中需包含以下信息:
1)简要描述该图标;
2)谈谈你的看法
4.(2019高三上·浦东开学考)Directions: Write an
English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
近期,你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研,结果如图所示,请结合图表信息,写一份调研报告,内容必须包括:
1) 说明图表反应的基本内容,
2) 列出你认为相对重要的两项因素(影响你自己选择大学的考虑因素)并说明原因。
5.(2019·新华模拟)下面图表是对某校高三学生填报高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告,并说说你自己的观点。
注意:①文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数;②词数120左右;③适当发挥使文章连贯。
Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.
6.(2019·如皋模拟)请认真阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Have you heard about the "small
goal" Wang Jianlin talked about in a show?Wang Jianlin, founder and chairman of
Dalian Wanda Group, made a statement during an interview part of the show on
how young people who want to become wealthy should plan ahead," The
direction is correct. But at first you'd better set a reachable tiny goal. For
example, I can start with earning only 100 million." Though the statement
about "setting a small goal" went viral on social media mostly as an
amazing opinion, there is no denying that setting proper goals really plays an
important role in people's life.
【写作内容】
1)用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2)综合上述信息,用约120个单词阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。
【写作要求】
1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
答案解析部分
1.【答案】 College graduates' options have changed a lot these years. In 2013, most of college graduates entered into society while the majority of college students want to continue post—graduate studies in 2019.
There are some reasons accounting for the great change of college graduates' options. For one thing, with the economy booming in China, our society lacks different kinds of qualified talents. Young people with higher degrees are badly needed in some fields. For another, some college students feel it hard to adapt to the competitive society. They intend to acquire more knowledge and accumulate more life experience.
As for me, I want to get employed after graduation. Firstly, I hope to land a well—paid job so that I can reduce my parents' financial burden. Secondly, I think it helps to enrich my work experience. Only in this way will I fit in society as soon as possible.
【知识点】看图写话;文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务:第一个任务要求用约30个词概述所给信息的主要内容;第二个任务要求1.简要分析大学生毕业后考研和就业人数变化的原因;2.请联系自身谈谈你将来大学毕业后的选择(就业还是读研)并说明理由(不少于两点)。第二部分给出了写作提纲,两大要点是中心。注意完成第一任务时,语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中,应涵盖题目所列出的两大要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如: In 2013, most of college graduates entered into society while the majority of college students want to continue post—graduate studies in 2019. 运用了对比并列句;There are some reasons accounting for the great change of college graduates' options. 运用了现在分词作定语;For one thing, with the economy booming in China, our society lacks different kinds of qualified talents. 运用了with的复合结构;Firstly, I hope to land a well—paid job so that I can reduce my parents' financial burden. 运用了目的状语从句;Secondly, I think it helps to enrich my work experience. 运用了宾语从句;Only in this way will I fit in society as soon as possible.运用了倒装句。
2.【答案】 As is shown in the chart, most students don't
have enough sleep. Surprisingly, most of the surveyed students sleep less than 7
hours. Only a few students sleep 7 to 9 hours. And those who sleep more than 9 hours
are in the minority.
Many factors contribute to this situation. First
of all, due to the fierce competition, students can only achieve success by working
hard. Secondly, with too much homework to do, students have very busy schedules.
Other factors, such as terrible bedding, noisy environment and pressure from life,
should also affect students' sleep.
Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures
should be taken to solve the problems. Most importantly, schools should limit the
amount of daily homework assigned. If so, teachers of major subjects will be likely
to give students less homework. In the meanwhile, students should improve their
study efficiency so that they can have enough sleep at night.
【知识点】看图写话;文字式议论文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇任务型写作。这篇任务型写作共分两个任务:第一个任务是概述左边饼图所示信息的主要内容;第二个任务结合右边饼图谈谈"影响睡眠的因素"并提出改进措施(至少两点)。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作时注意上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: As is shown in the chart, most students don't have enough sleep. 运用了非限制性定语从句;And those who sleep more than 9 hours are in the minority.运用了限制性定语从句; Secondly, with too much homework to do, students have very busy schedules. 运用了with的复合结构; Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problems.运用了被动语态;If so, teachers of major subjects will be likely to give students less homework.运用了省略; In the meanwhile, students should improve their study efficiency so that they can have enough sleep at night.运用了目的状语从句。
3.【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】看图写话;图画式说明文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇看图,要求考生简要描述所给图标,并谈谈自己的看法。写作背景:经过一段时间的网上学习之后,明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查。动笔前,考生一定要认真分析要点,根据内容提示和分析图表,抓住写作的关键点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
4.【答案】A Survey on Choosing A College
Nowadays, more and more senior high school students pay much attention to choosing the most ideal college of their own in order to get a better education. There are many factors that they should take into consideration. In this context, a survey have been conducted to figure out the main factors affecting students' decisions.
From the histogram, four factors are listed. We can see that the interest of majors is a factor that most students consider first, 175 students has chosen it. Then the fame of a college comes to the second place, 150 student agree with it. Thirdly, 90 students believes that reasonable charges are very important for them to make up their mind. Last but not least, 70 students regard the convenient traffic as an necessary factor to choose a college.
As far as I'm concerned, I will allow for the interest of majors and reasonable charges when choosing a college. For one thing, interest plays a big part in motivating a student to study further; for another thing, reasonable charges can make a student not worry heavy economic burden.
All in all, every student should make their decisions seriously when choosing a college.
【知识点】看图写话;图画式说明文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图表作文。第1步:根据提示可知, 本篇为一篇说明文;近期,你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研,结果如图所示,请结合图表信息,写一份调研报告,内容必须包括:1) 说明图表反应的基本内容,2) 列出你认为相对重要的两项因素(影响你自己选择大学的考虑因素)并说明原因。第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组)。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如: There are many factors that they should take into consideration. 运用了限制性定语从句; From the histogram, four factors are listed.运用了被动语态; We can see that the interest of majors is a factor that most students consider first, 175 students has chosen it. 运用了宾语从句和限制性定语从句;Thirdly, 90 students believes that reasonable charges are very important for them to make up their mind.运用了宾语从句; As far as I'm concerned, I will allow for the interest of majors and reasonable charges when choosing a college.运用了省略。
5.【答案】 Some senior middle school
graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and
universities.
About 35% of the students insist that the
choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the way
leading to success. They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what
they have no interest in.
About 45% of the students, however,
consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it
will help them find a good job. In addition, interest can be developed and
changed.
Interestingly, there are about 20% of the
students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow
the advice offered by their parents or teachers. In my opinion, interest is the
most important of all. Without interest you can't study the subject very well
and may have more difficulty with your career.
【知识点】看图写话;图画式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图表类写作。第1步:根据提示可知,要求写一篇报告;下面图表是对某校高三学生填报高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告,并说说你自己的观点。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:insist (坚持), be based on (以……为基础), miserable (可悲的), be obliged to (有义务), matter (有影响;重要), In addition (此外)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: About 35% of the students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest.运用了宾语从句和虚拟语气; They say interest is the way leading to success.和 They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in.运用了宾语从句; About 45% of the students, however, consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it will help them find a good job. 运用了宾语从句,限制性定语从句和因果并列句; Interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow the advice offered by their parents or teachers. 运用了限制性定语从句和结果状语从句。
6.【答案】 Despite Wang's suggestion that youngpeople should work out a plan to realize their dreams, statistics indicate thatmost teenagers are at a loss on how to set a reachable goal.
It is undeniable that setting a clear goal is of great
significance to teenagers. First and foremost, goals often serve as a
guideline, helping teenagers make progress steadily towards their destinations.
Furthermore, it is the process of striving to achieve the target that teenagers
can derive pleasure from. Without goals, teenagers might be in the dark about
what to do.
As teenagers, we should know nothing has a greater influence
on life than future planning. Firstly, we should make it clear where our
passion lies and set a primary goal. Then we'd better stay focused and commit
ourselves to achieving the target. Only by the combination of clear goals and
persistent endeavor can we steadily raise the level of aspiration.
【知识点】其他作文;图画式议论文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是是一篇任务型写作。1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2. 综合上述信息,用约120个单词阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。本文是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务:第一个任务要求用约30个词概述所给信息的主要内容;第二个任务要求阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。第二部分给出了写作提纲,两大要点是中心。注意完成第一任务时,语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中,应涵盖题目所列出的两大要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: Despite Wang's suggestion that young people should work out a plan to realize their dreams, statistics indicate that most teenagers are at a loss on how to set a reachable goal.运用了同位语从句和宾语从句; It is undeniable that setting a clear goal is of great significance to teenagers. 运用了主语从句; Furthermore, it is the process of striving to achieve the target that teenagers can derive pleasure from. Without goals, teenagers might be in the dark about what to do.运用了定语从句; As teenagers, we should know nothing has a greater influence on life than future planning.运用了宾语从句; Firstly, we should make it clear where our passion lies and set a primary goal.运用了宾语从句和it作形式宾语; Only by the combination of clear goals and persistent endeavor can we steadily raise the level of aspiration. 运用了倒装句。
备考2023年高考英语二轮专题:书面表达(图表作文)
一、书面表达
1.(2020·江都模拟)阅读下面短文,结合图表内容,按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的短文。
Every year, many college students graduate and they feel distressed and confused because they do not know whether they should choose to continue their postgraduate studies or get employed In fact, either option has its own advantages and disadvantages.
If you are passionate about learning and can devote yourself to it, then choose to apply for a postgraduate course. Of course, you can also enter into society to sharpen your skills and enrich your experience after graduation from college or university.
[写作内容]
1)用约30个词概括上述图文内容;
2)结合上述信息,简要分析大学生毕业后考研和就业人数变化的原因;
3)请联系自身谈谈你将来大学毕业后的选择(就业还是读研)并说明理由(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】 College graduates' options have changed a lot these years. In 2013, most of college graduates entered into society while the majority of college students want to continue post—graduate studies in 2019.
There are some reasons accounting for the great change of college graduates' options. For one thing, with the economy booming in China, our society lacks different kinds of qualified talents. Young people with higher degrees are badly needed in some fields. For another, some college students feel it hard to adapt to the competitive society. They intend to acquire more knowledge and accumulate more life experience.
As for me, I want to get employed after graduation. Firstly, I hope to land a well—paid job so that I can reduce my parents' financial burden. Secondly, I think it helps to enrich my work experience. Only in this way will I fit in society as soon as possible.
【知识点】看图写话;文字式议论文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务:第一个任务要求用约30个词概述所给信息的主要内容;第二个任务要求1.简要分析大学生毕业后考研和就业人数变化的原因;2.请联系自身谈谈你将来大学毕业后的选择(就业还是读研)并说明理由(不少于两点)。第二部分给出了写作提纲,两大要点是中心。注意完成第一任务时,语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中,应涵盖题目所列出的两大要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如: In 2013, most of college graduates entered into society while the majority of college students want to continue post—graduate studies in 2019. 运用了对比并列句;There are some reasons accounting for the great change of college graduates' options. 运用了现在分词作定语;For one thing, with the economy booming in China, our society lacks different kinds of qualified talents. 运用了with的复合结构;Firstly, I hope to land a well—paid job so that I can reduce my parents' financial burden. 运用了目的状语从句;Secondly, I think it helps to enrich my work experience. 运用了宾语从句;Only in this way will I fit in society as soon as possible.运用了倒装句。
2.(2020·江苏模拟)下面是某中学的中学生睡眠情况的调查结果,请根据要求,用英文写一篇调查报告。
【写作内容】
1)概述左边饼图所示信息的主要内容;
2)结合右边饼图谈谈"影响睡眠的因素"并提出改进措施(至少两点)。
【写作要求】
1)词数150词左右;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】 As is shown in the chart, most students don't
have enough sleep. Surprisingly, most of the surveyed students sleep less than 7
hours. Only a few students sleep 7 to 9 hours. And those who sleep more than 9 hours
are in the minority.
Many factors contribute to this situation. First
of all, due to the fierce competition, students can only achieve success by working
hard. Secondly, with too much homework to do, students have very busy schedules.
Other factors, such as terrible bedding, noisy environment and pressure from life,
should also affect students' sleep.
Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures
should be taken to solve the problems. Most importantly, schools should limit the
amount of daily homework assigned. If so, teachers of major subjects will be likely
to give students less homework. In the meanwhile, students should improve their
study efficiency so that they can have enough sleep at night.
【知识点】看图写话;文字式议论文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇任务型写作。这篇任务型写作共分两个任务:第一个任务是概述左边饼图所示信息的主要内容;第二个任务结合右边饼图谈谈"影响睡眠的因素"并提出改进措施(至少两点)。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作时注意上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: As is shown in the chart, most students don't have enough sleep. 运用了非限制性定语从句;And those who sleep more than 9 hours are in the minority.运用了限制性定语从句; Secondly, with too much homework to do, students have very busy schedules. 运用了with的复合结构; Therefore, in my opinion, effective measures should be taken to solve the problems.运用了被动语态;If so, teachers of major subjects will be likely to give students less homework.运用了省略; In the meanwhile, students should improve their study efficiency so that they can have enough sleep at night.运用了目的状语从句。
3.(2020·浦东新模拟)Directions: Write an English composition
in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
经过一段时间的网上学习之后,明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查,调查结果如图所示。
A. 直播课并且有师生互动 B. 录播课并且之后有师生互动时间
C. 直播课但无师生互动 D. 录播课且之后也无师生互动时间
你可能会用到的词汇:
直播课:live streaming lesson 录播课: prerecorded lesson
请你根据该图标写篇作文,你的文中需包含以下信息:
1)简要描述该图标;
2)谈谈你的看法
【答案】暂未更新
【知识点】看图写话;图画式说明文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇看图,要求考生简要描述所给图标,并谈谈自己的看法。写作背景:经过一段时间的网上学习之后,明启中学在高三学生中进行了一个题为“你最喜欢的在线上课模式”的调查。动笔前,考生一定要认真分析要点,根据内容提示和分析图表,抓住写作的关键点。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
4.(2019高三上·浦东开学考)Directions: Write an
English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
近期,你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研,结果如图所示,请结合图表信息,写一份调研报告,内容必须包括:
1) 说明图表反应的基本内容,
2) 列出你认为相对重要的两项因素(影响你自己选择大学的考虑因素)并说明原因。
【答案】A Survey on Choosing A College
Nowadays, more and more senior high school students pay much attention to choosing the most ideal college of their own in order to get a better education. There are many factors that they should take into consideration. In this context, a survey have been conducted to figure out the main factors affecting students' decisions.
From the histogram, four factors are listed. We can see that the interest of majors is a factor that most students consider first, 175 students has chosen it. Then the fame of a college comes to the second place, 150 student agree with it. Thirdly, 90 students believes that reasonable charges are very important for them to make up their mind. Last but not least, 70 students regard the convenient traffic as an necessary factor to choose a college.
As far as I'm concerned, I will allow for the interest of majors and reasonable charges when choosing a college. For one thing, interest plays a big part in motivating a student to study further; for another thing, reasonable charges can make a student not worry heavy economic burden.
All in all, every student should make their decisions seriously when choosing a college.
【知识点】看图写话;图画式说明文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图表作文。第1步:根据提示可知, 本篇为一篇说明文;近期,你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研,结果如图所示,请结合图表信息,写一份调研报告,内容必须包括:1) 说明图表反应的基本内容,2) 列出你认为相对重要的两项因素(影响你自己选择大学的考虑因素)并说明原因。第2步:根据写作要求, 确定关键词(组)。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章的档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如: There are many factors that they should take into consideration. 运用了限制性定语从句; From the histogram, four factors are listed.运用了被动语态; We can see that the interest of majors is a factor that most students consider first, 175 students has chosen it. 运用了宾语从句和限制性定语从句;Thirdly, 90 students believes that reasonable charges are very important for them to make up their mind.运用了宾语从句; As far as I'm concerned, I will allow for the interest of majors and reasonable charges when choosing a college.运用了省略。
5.(2019·新华模拟)下面图表是对某校高三学生填报高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告,并说说你自己的观点。
注意:①文章的开头已经写好,不计入总词数;②词数120左右;③适当发挥使文章连贯。
Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.
【答案】 Some senior middle school
graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and
universities.
About 35% of the students insist that the
choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the way
leading to success. They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what
they have no interest in.
About 45% of the students, however,
consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it
will help them find a good job. In addition, interest can be developed and
changed.
Interestingly, there are about 20% of the
students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow
the advice offered by their parents or teachers. In my opinion, interest is the
most important of all. Without interest you can't study the subject very well
and may have more difficulty with your career.
【知识点】看图写话;图画式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇图表类写作。第1步:根据提示可知,要求写一篇报告;下面图表是对某校高三学生填报高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请用英语写一篇简要的报告,并说说你自己的观点。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:insist (坚持), be based on (以……为基础), miserable (可悲的), be obliged to (有义务), matter (有影响;重要), In addition (此外)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: About 35% of the students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest.运用了宾语从句和虚拟语气; They say interest is the way leading to success.和 They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in.运用了宾语从句; About 45% of the students, however, consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it will help them find a good job. 运用了宾语从句,限制性定语从句和因果并列句; Interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow the advice offered by their parents or teachers. 运用了限制性定语从句和结果状语从句。
6.(2019·如皋模拟)请认真阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Have you heard about the "small
goal" Wang Jianlin talked about in a show?Wang Jianlin, founder and chairman of
Dalian Wanda Group, made a statement during an interview part of the show on
how young people who want to become wealthy should plan ahead," The
direction is correct. But at first you'd better set a reachable tiny goal. For
example, I can start with earning only 100 million." Though the statement
about "setting a small goal" went viral on social media mostly as an
amazing opinion, there is no denying that setting proper goals really plays an
important role in people's life.
【写作内容】
1)用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2)综合上述信息,用约120个单词阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。
【写作要求】
1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3)不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
【答案】 Despite Wang's suggestion that youngpeople should work out a plan to realize their dreams, statistics indicate thatmost teenagers are at a loss on how to set a reachable goal.
It is undeniable that setting a clear goal is of great
significance to teenagers. First and foremost, goals often serve as a
guideline, helping teenagers make progress steadily towards their destinations.
Furthermore, it is the process of striving to achieve the target that teenagers
can derive pleasure from. Without goals, teenagers might be in the dark about
what to do.
As teenagers, we should know nothing has a greater influence
on life than future planning. Firstly, we should make it clear where our
passion lies and set a primary goal. Then we'd better stay focused and commit
ourselves to achieving the target. Only by the combination of clear goals and
persistent endeavor can we steadily raise the level of aspiration.
【知识点】其他作文;图画式议论文;半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是是一篇任务型写作。1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;2. 综合上述信息,用约120个单词阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。本文是一篇任务型写作。共分两个任务:第一个任务要求用约30个词概述所给信息的主要内容;第二个任务要求阐述设定目标对青少年的重要性以及我们应该如何规划以实现自己的人生目标。第二部分给出了写作提纲,两大要点是中心。注意完成第一任务时,语言使用应简练、准确、到位。在第二个任务中,应涵盖题目所列出的两大要点。本文应主要使用一般现在时态。写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型,注意行文的连贯和逻辑性。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全,结构完整,条理清晰,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分,使整个文章结构紧凑,很好地完成了写作任务。例如: Despite Wang's suggestion that young people should work out a plan to realize their dreams, statistics indicate that most teenagers are at a loss on how to set a reachable goal.运用了同位语从句和宾语从句; It is undeniable that setting a clear goal is of great significance to teenagers. 运用了主语从句; Furthermore, it is the process of striving to achieve the target that teenagers can derive pleasure from. Without goals, teenagers might be in the dark about what to do.运用了定语从句; As teenagers, we should know nothing has a greater influence on life than future planning.运用了宾语从句; Firstly, we should make it clear where our passion lies and set a primary goal.运用了宾语从句和it作形式宾语; Only by the combination of clear goals and persistent endeavor can we steadily raise the level of aspiration. 运用了倒装句。